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Out of Touch [Ontae] [PG-13] [1/1]

Jun 07, 2011 00:06

Title: Out of Touch
Pairing: Ontae
Genre: Sci-fi, General
Rating: PG-13 [Language]
Word Count: 4,135
Summary: They never know where, when, or if they'll find another like themselves.

( IThe blizzard hadn't been fore casted, but then, most fateful events in life aren't. )

ontae, shinee fanfiction, oneshot, pg-13, finished

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gooberso1 September 25 2011, 23:23:59 UTC

oh my gosh, i can't believe that I never posted my comment!! I was going to but.. then I had to leave LJ for a little while. But, I'm back and finished re-reading it! I loved the story! You wrote it amazingly, with a little twist that I wasn't expecting!

Jinki cocks his head to the side, momentarily forgetting his pain. “Why are you wearing gloves? I'm not bleeding.”

“Germaphobic.”

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Of course, or maybe Jinki would have thought about the cold instead... it was the winter time. xD

“It's okay,” Jinki reassures, finally casting Taemin's glove off. He looks up, numb fingers wrapped around Taemin's just as chilling to the touch hand.

Taemin gapes at him “B-but, I've never .. I haven't been able to touch a person since - “

“Whatever you have, it can't affect me.”

Eyes rapidly blink as Taemin tries to fight back tears. He smiles down at Jinki's hand. “I,” his voice cracks,” I thought I was ... alone.” He falls to his knees beside Jinki, tears beginning to fall freely.

“You aren't.”

I loved that part... it was so sweet and cute!!!
I can feel Taemin's emotions so well!
He's so happy to not be alone any more! D:

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