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Fic: Supernatural After-Hours

Feb 28, 2013 12:30

Title: Supernatural After-Hours
Author: brightly_litRating: R for language and not too vivid descriptions of porn ( Read more... )

sam, gen, dean, rating: r, fanfic

Comments 23

lolaann1 February 28 2013, 21:28:36 UTC

“Not having a soul makes you so good in bed!” the woman squealed.

Yep, that sounds like porn ;) Lol, Poor guys. This was great. I am sure robo!Sam put Christian Grey to shame.

I really do hope we see Chuck again though. I miss him. And I like the view of him as the poor writer, desperate to make a buck on whatever crap happens to be selling at the moment. I've never been as fond of the 'Chuck is God' view of canon (even if they do eventually make it a fact).

You should crosspost this over at spn_bigpretzel. I'm a mod there, so I can tell you that's our sorta thing. If you've never checked it out, it's a comm devoted to the funny or lighter side of the show. Kind of a break from all the heavy angst out there. New members are always welcome :)

brightly_lit March 1 2013, 03:04:36 UTC

Aw, thanks, I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for your long, satisfying comment.

I am sure robo!Sam put Christian Grey to shame.

Ha ha ... I don't want to think too much about this ...

Yeah, I always loved Chuck as the nerdy, hapless loser. The balance of uber-powerful and completely helpless was irresistable. (Did they make him God? I haven't actually seen any season 8 yet.)

Thanks for the tip on your comm! I posted it at the crack!fic community, but this isn't exactly crack, and I couldn't find any just humor communities, so I'm thrilled to hear about yours. I shall post there straightaway.

Thanks for stopping by!

monteseverus March 1 2013, 16:14:08 UTC

Yes, yes, yes! This story is so amazing. Now, I want to see it for real. And Chuck being behind it cracked me up. You know he isn't really sorry. He does have archangels protecting him. :-)Best part of this whole thing is how you made Sam the Stud and Dean the emotional one. Friending you so I can read more of your stories.

brightly_lit March 2 2013, 04:15:46 UTC

SOO true that he isn't really sorry! I totally want to see it for real, too! It seems like an episode they might actually do ...

Thanks for the nice compliments. Friended you back. :-)

sothereyougo March 1 2013, 17:36:27 UTC

I"m here via spn_bigpretzel. This is a great idea and very funny. When Dean realized that the pay-per-view porn he was watching was about Sam, I literally LOL'd. It's all very well-done, but two of my favorite parts are Becky defending Sam against Chuck's depiction of his callous treatment of his one night stand lovers while he was soulless!Sam and Dean's enjoyment of teasing Sam and his hoping to enjoy the notoriety of the books by getting more hook-ups. My most very favorite part is this though:

“Great, Dean, perfect. Then think of all eight million of them the next time you try to do it with one of them, because you know they’ll be reading about it a few months later. Every single detail--whether it was good, whether it was bad, every piggish thought you had, how long you lasted ....”

Dean abruptly stopped smiling. Why did he have to say things like that? Freakin’ Sam! Why’d he have to be so ... so ... logical?! “Thank a lot, bro. Seriously, why’d you have to point that out? Now I won’t be able to do it at all!”Sometimes I think ( ... )

brightly_lit March 2 2013, 04:13:59 UTC

Perfect icon!! I loved that scene.

What a great comment! I'm glad I made you lol, and it's really fun hearing about your favorite parts. You are so right that Dean's maddest that Sam's just thinking it through. I hate that people look at Sam like that, because I'M like that, just pointing out the truth, and I love Sam for being like that. :-)

Thanks for reading, and commenting!

sammichgirl March 2 2013, 04:46:42 UTC

Oh, this made me laugh, I really enjoyed it!

I always like reading more fic with Chuck, he's one of my favorite minor characters, and OF COURSE he's seen it all, in depth, every single thing. And dude's gotta make money to live, lol.

100 Hues of Sam, wouldn't I love to see that book published for real. Or made into a movie.

Dean reading the porn about Sam, hahahahaha. I can see that actually happening. As well as Becky never cheating on her OTP of the boys together.

brightly_lit March 3 2013, 04:22:29 UTC

OF COURSE he's seen it all, in depth, every single thing. And dude's gotta make money to live, lol.

Totally! Poor guy's got absolutely nothing else going for him and the whole "propheteering" thing is a suckfest, I always felt so sorry for him on the show and like Sam and Dean should cut him some slack. Writing about their sex lives, though ... okay, that's taking it too far.

YEEES, I'd like to see that book/movie, as well!

Yeah, Becky's OTP, I love it! (I actually had to look 'OTP' up--I'm new to the whole fanfic thing ...)

Thanks for the great comment.

cuddyclothes March 2 2013, 18:55:14 UTC

Oh God, this was fucking hysterical! And it kept getting worse, and worse and worse...

A Hundred Hues of Sam, A Hundred More Hues of Sam, and A Hundred Other Hues of Sam--

Genius! The book titles made me laugh the hardest. And Chuck cashing in! The older books never had much of a readership, so why not go in that direction?

And poor Dean, not being able to have ANY sexual release for months, but Chuck would write about it.

*mems*

brightly_lit March 3 2013, 04:29:07 UTC

And it kept getting worse, and worse and worse...

hee hee!!

I had so much fun with the book titles! Chuck himself always said he was a bad writer, so I figured his titles for porn novels would surely be extra bad, especially since he was probably conflicted about writing them in the first place--but yeah, I figured he would so cash in ....

Thanks for your great comment. :-)