SPN Fanfic: Stuck

Feb 14, 2013 11:22

Title: Stuck
Author: brightly_litRating: PG-13 for child abuse, language ( Read more... )

sam, gen, dean, john, fanfic

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jasmineisland February 14 2013, 23:59:56 UTC
Broke my heart. Sam already knew that his death was on the table, so to speak.
There are so many stories where Sam is an asshole when they're teenagers, but very few where Dean is the jerk of a big brother that most teenage boys would be if they were saddled with their brothers 24/7/365. Great take on teen!chesters.

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brightly_lit February 16 2013, 00:50:11 UTC
Totally! Most older brothers tend to be like that, anyway, and then add on top of that all the responsibility for Sam's well-being and that Sam's the favorite, I couldn't picture it any other way.

So glad you enjoyed.

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dont_hate_me01 February 15 2013, 19:33:26 UTC
Seeing Sam so cynical at such a young age, heartbreaking. Great fic!

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brightly_lit February 16 2013, 00:51:19 UTC
Heartbreaking--the highest compliment! ;-D Glad you enjoyed it.

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super_atea March 3 2013, 12:30:26 UTC
heartbreaking, I love it. Thank you

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brightly_lit March 3 2013, 17:08:19 UTC
Glad you liked, thanks for reading.

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katsheswims March 3 2013, 20:59:07 UTC
Very good although very sad.

But Sam opened up to Dean and now it's them against their father and the world if it comes down to it.

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brightly_lit March 4 2013, 02:12:51 UTC
Yeah, it's a really dark one, but I dig that sometimes.

them against their father and the world if it comes down to it.

Well said.

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kinkthatwinked March 3 2013, 23:19:34 UTC
Oh my God, if only the show had done a childhood flashback like this!

It makes sense that these kids should have had run-ins with social services, and that the bored local kids would go to lengths to make trouble for the new kids.

Your take on their lives felt heartbreakingly real. How could Sam not consider death when faced with real monsters everyday? How could John have not considered killing Sam himself, if he had any idea what Sam was? And how could Dean not pick up on it?

You also wrote about what many siblings don't or can't admit: that the older essentially bullying the younger for years can lead to an estrangement between the adult siblings that never goes away. It was a great idea to write about how these two got past that.

Excellent job.

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brightly_lit March 4 2013, 02:22:25 UTC
You're so sweet! (I too would love to see this in an episode, maybe intercut with present-day stuff that illustrates how they're now on each other's side, no matter what happens.)

How could Sam not consider death when faced with real monsters everyday? How could John have not considered killing Sam himself, if he had any idea what Sam was? And how could Dean not pick up on it?

YES YES YES. That part where Dean sees John holding the gun looking at Sam--I imagined that what John was really thinking about was, "Could I ever do this if I had to?" though it looks much more sinister to Dean.

You also wrote about what many siblings don't or can't admit: that the older essentially bullying the younger for years can lead to an estrangement between the adult siblings that never goes away. It was a great idea to write about how these two got past that.Thank you. You're so right, and the older sibling is so often like, "What's the problem?" They don't even seem to remember all the things they did that were literally torture for the ( ... )

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