Heroes Fic: Territories

[brighteyed_jill]

Title: Territories
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Sylar/Luke
Word Count: 8000
Warnings and spoilers: Vague spoilers through season 4, AU-ness of a canon-bending kind melding the Virus AU and events of season 4. Just don’t think too hard about it and you’ll be fine. Implied voyeurism, criminal behavior, and Issues.
Author’s notes: written for perdiccas for hope_in_sight. Thanks

Comments

[perdiccas]

Okay, so I've reread this like 5 times since you posted. It's like you broke my head open and picked out exactly what I wanted and handed it back to me in a deliciously sexy package. WHY IS THE END OF THE WORLD SO FASCINATING? ♥

I love, love, love Luke's journey to New York. You included so many great moments and details, I could really picture the world he lives in now: all the festering bodies in Texas, the truck with the black ops dude who'd shot the rest of his team (possibly my fave moment in the whole fic. It gave me shivers!), Luke nuking the first hotel he stays in to get rid of the things that cast shadows in the night. OH AND THE BIT WITH THE MANGY DOG. I LIED. THE DOG BIT WAS MY FAVOURITE. POOR LUKE. ;_; He's so alone, and I love how long it takes for that to really sink in for him.

I loved that Luke ended up in the loft and then that the grafitti was a means of directing Sylar to him. I loved that Sylar found him but spied him before making his move. And oh lordy the sex. The sex was so hot and posessive and unnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnf. Yes, thank you and I'll be in my bunk.

[brighteyed_jill]

Have I mentioned how happy your squee makes me? Very happy, is the point.

Dude, the end of the world is endlessly fascinating! I just want to read and write dystopian fiction FOREVER! I think it's because I learn interesting things about people's characters when they're reduced to the essentials.

I'm glad you liked all the little details about this particular apocalyptic future. Y'know the dog? I hesitated over putting that in, because I said to myself, "Listen, self. You write some pretty sick shit, but you can NOT kill a DOG, ffs!" But then I did anyway. At least Luke was sorry, right?

Anyway, I'm so happy it all worked for you (sex included--Sylar's big dick makes everything better!), and thanks for being so patient!