Comments | brighteyed_jill: Fic: Disciplinary Action

brighteyed_jill

Fic: Disciplinary Action

Sep 21, 2009 07:38

"I've never beamed three people, from two targets, onto one pad before!" So I wrote two stories (this and Proper Motivation) involving kinda Spock/McCoy/Kirk which are really about Kirk/McCoy, mostly, except who’s actually getting (metaphorically) fucked changes. For both having the same mix of who’s-putting-what-where, the stories are really ( Read more... )

character: james t. kirk, genre: slash, kink meme ftw!, character: spock, character: dr. leonard "sexy" mccoy, star trek, fic

Comments 21

24_centuries September 22 2009, 01:25:52 UTC

This. Is. AWESOME!

I love Spock making Jim watch! And Bones prepping himself? :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD Um, yeah. I kindasortaREALLY liked that detail :D

Spock making sure Bones enjoyed it too was deliciously torturous for him, I'm sure.

ALL AROUND AWESOMESAUCE! \o/ \o/

Thanks so much for sharing! :D

brighteyed_jill September 25 2009, 20:34:51 UTC

Yay! So glad you enjoyed! And yeah, you know Bones got himself ready BEFORE he booty-called Jim. Cuz James T. Kirk is not so patient when he's feeling on top of the world and really pleased with himself...

kilala10 September 22 2009, 18:39:53 UTC

Oh geeze, this was hot 8D

brighteyed_jill September 25 2009, 20:35:07 UTC

Thanks much!

cynicalbeast October 15 2010, 00:35:16 UTC

I think I just drooled.

kain_was_here September 23 2009, 06:10:42 UTC

JESUS

FUCK

AUGH.

that was like, nuclear fusion HOT. GUH.

YOU JUST MADE THE FIRST WEEK OF THE QUARTER A TONNNNN BETTER.

(crazy english 101 prof, is THIS a good example of narrative writing? I THINK SO YES I DO, I'D RATHER READ THIS THAN YOUR HANDOUTS.....okay I'm done.)

Now I really want to illustrate this or something...anything to continue the amazing hotness

brighteyed_jill September 25 2009, 20:36:42 UTC

Heehee. Narrative writing! Look, there was a beginning, a middle, and an end. A conflict, and a resolution. Stuff happened, therefor it was narrative, idek! So glad I could contribute to making life better is some small (porny) way.

Now I really want to illustrate this or something...anything to continue the amazing hotness
YES PLZ! The fission must continue! For real!

loveflyfree September 23 2009, 06:10:51 UTC

*thud*

yeah.

brighteyed_jill September 25 2009, 20:40:19 UTC

*checks for softness of floor* Yeah, sorry about that. Thanks for reading! Your icon is lolicious.

crackemod September 28 2009, 06:15:10 UTC

Congrats! You have been recced at crackenterprise.

You can view the entry here.

brighteyed_jill October 5 2009, 04:17:32 UTC

Well thankee kind mods.