Fic: Unspoken

[brighteyed_jill]

Title: Unspoken
Rating: R
Genre: Slash(ish)
Pairings or Characters: Sylar/Luke suggested
Warnings: implied underage sexual activity
Author’s note: Written for heroes_contest drabble prompt “freedom.” Ohaithar, special hell!
Summary: Luke can’t get what he wants.

Comments

[weehobbit]

Oooh, I like how this shows how it all could have started! Before the Syluke porn xD

I like how you contrast this sense of wide open spaces while on a road trip and the cramped space in the car and hotel with all the things going on in their heads. How in the end it's like they're letting go of it all. Nicely done!

[brighteyed_jill]

Thanks! Yeah, I'm on my way to special hell, but haven't gotten around to writing teh pr0n for this pairing yet. Give me time.

I'm glad you liked that contrast. This was a departure from my usual style, so I'm happy that it worked for you!

[perdiccas]

Oh heck, this is amazing. So sexy though nothing explicit happened. Luke jerking off in Sylar's presence with Sylar not watching/watching was brilliant and I loved the whole silent treatment thing because it seems so very *Luke* to try that and have it backfire.

Excellent!!!! <3

[brighteyed_jill]

Thanks! Coming from you, O Queen of This Pairing, that means a lot. I was trying to up the sexiness without a lot of explicit what-have-you, so I'm glad that came through. Thanks for reading!

[carmexgirl]

Oh wow! I adore the imagery in this, and the structure and everything!

Love how Sylar refuses to look at Luke while he's jerking off, and I just love the tension between the two of them, with Luke acting like a petulant child because he can't have what he wants.

This was really fantastic!

[brighteyed_jill]

Thank you! I was trying something a little different from my norm in terms of style and structure, so I'm glad you liked it. And Luke is such a teenage boy sometimes... Thanks for commenting!

[ashesfor_trees]

I love Luke's shyness--it really highlights the fact that he is young!
and oh GOD Sylar is so sexy :)

[brighteyed_jill]

Thanks so much. And I'm there with you 100%: Sylar is the sex!

[brighteyed_jill]

Yeah, I'm not exactly sure how I felt about this 'ship, yet, but I thought I'd take it for a spin and see what it can do. And Sylar is just... hotness. Personified. The man is sexy as all get out. I'm glad you enjoyed!