Fic: Secret's in the Telling, Part II

Jun 28, 2008 20:57

If you’ve been wondering what the hell I’ve been doing for the past few months, this is it. The rest is written (over 40,000 words of it), but still being tweaked. I’m waiting until it’s all done to post to the coms, probably sometime in the next two weeks. But go ahead and enjoy in the meantime, because if you are already reading this, you ( Read more... )

genre: slash, fandom: supernatural, fandom: heroes, fic

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enderwiggin24 October 4 2008, 10:23:02 UTC

Peter watched with amusement. Dean had ordered a bacon cheeseburger, fries, coffee, and cherry pie. The guy was totally unrestrained Id. Peter took a moment to wonder what it would have been like to have grown up with a brother like Dean-someone who didn’t censor his every action. Someone who said exactly what he was thinking. Well…Most of the time.
hee, yep, Dean as ID, totally!

"Well sorry if I'm not as scary as the great Nathan Petrelli."
Nathan gave a long-suffering sigh. "Peter, you have the power to level a city. Could you at least pretend to be scary?"
oh yeah, its so easy to see nathan being in charge, but Peter?? nayy, not the present peter
(now futurePeter in S3 right now...gahhhhhhhh, runs off screaming...)

am’s eyes widened in surprise. The trunk was full of strange supplies: rope, duct tape, a fire extinguisher, lighter fluid, maps, a padded case with an assortment of syringes, a duffel bag stuffed full of cash, and guns. Lots of guns: tazer guns, tranquilizer guns, handguns. If the arsenal didn’t rival what was in the trunk of the Impala, it was only because it didn’t belong to hunters-at least not hunters who were after the monsters Sam was familiar with. Whatever mysterious business Nathan kept alluding to, it wasn’t demon hunting.
man, again, I totally could visually see see, the differences in their trunks, thanks to your great descriptions!

Sam quickly tucked the picture back under the NYPD badges and glanced surreptitiously at Nathan. Luckily, Nathan had his eyes on the road. Sam slid the box of badges back into the glove compartment. He didn't want Nathan to think he'd been prying, and in all honesty he didn't really care about Nathan's name. But it was enlightening to know that Nathan and Peter had a real family somewhere: the sort that had reunions on Nantucket for which jackets and ties were required, apparently. He wondered what had brought Nathan from that to this: crappy hotel rooms and greasy diner food and dusty back roads.
this makes me so sad, thinking of the life both Nathan and Peter could have, if not for all the genetic mutations...

“Drop the gun. Is your life really worth his? The way I hear it, you’ve only got a few more months, anyway. One.”
damn, this line, it just totally screams for a sequel, where sam somehow has to work together with the petrellies again, to save dean!!!
omg, please tell, that you are thinking of another crossover!

“Sorry,” Peter muttered as he clung to Dean. “I’ll be fine. It’s just… Nathan has always been here when I needed him.”
yeah, right, cries, reading that makes me all gone teary!

"Ah… Dude." Dean turned away. He tried to remember if he'd thought anything incriminating around Peter. Like how I'm wanted for murder in three states. Or how I traded my soul to a demon. Or that I'm fucking my brother. "Oh god." Dean whirled around to face Peter. "Are you reading my mind right now?"
another priceless peek into deans mind, hee!

Peter took a deep breath. “I’m fucking my brother.”
Dean stared at Peter, bangs plastered to his forehead in the downpour, eyes open and haunted and begging Dean to understand. “That’s….” he managed. He should be telling Peter how sick that was, how he didn’t want to hear it, but he couldn’t get the words out. He felt nothing but calm.
“My brother Nathan. We’re having sex. Have for years.”
aqwwwm, love that part to pieces, Peter, way to go! and dean, reallyLOL!
you both and your brotherly love!

will continue later, other stuff calling!

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brighteyed_jill October 5 2008, 03:35:02 UTC
Every time Dean eats, the fangirls squee. I love that they included clips of him eating on the gag real in... Season 2? Don't remember... Anyway, he's adorable when he's acting immature.

Yeah, Peter had trouble being badass... But wait 4 or 5 years, and suddenly he'll be MADE of badass! I mean, Future!Peter is one scary bloke. But I love it when he needs his brother.

I've toyed with the idea of doing a sequel to this story... Part of the problem is that it's already fairly AU for our Heroes guys, but there's some potential to set it in Season 3 of Heroes... We shall see which way the plot bunnies bite...

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We shall see which way the plot bunnies bite enderwiggin24 October 5 2008, 20:37:05 UTC
I really really pray for it, that they will bite you hard :DD

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