Fic: The Secret's in the Telling (SPN/Heroes) Part I
Ohaithar. I seem to have this problem wherein I only think in novel-length stories now. It’s actually kind of an issue. But I was recently converted to the Supernatural camp, and the bro-yay squared would not leave me alone. The story is nearly completed, and I’m going to wait until it’s actually completely complete to post it on the comms, but I
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hee, that is so true!
and I love it, how Dean continues to call Peter pretty boy :D
And I love this interludes with the flashbacks!
I am rereading your story the second time, and while in the first round, I found them to be a bit irritating, coz they felt they were disrupting the flow of the present story, now, on the second read, I absolutely love the flashbacks!
Peter’s expression went from exasperation to anticipation in less than a second. “Forget I said anything. And forget the filing. I think bed is calling.”
haha, Peter is insatisable , very, very cute!
Nathan shut him up with a fierce kiss, pinning him to the wall with the length of his body, riding up against Peter’s leg. “Just for me,” Nathan growled into his mouth. “Mine, Peter.”
I so love a possessive nathan!
This was like taking a road trip with the hottest girl he’d ever picked up at a bar
damn, you have too many lines, that I love, I could quote your entire chapter!
and its midnight here! argg, I am afraid, I will have to continue tomorrow with my comments for the next chapters!
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I'm glad the flashbacks worked for you the second time around. Honestly, I had to have some way to get Dean/Sam and Nathan/Peter into the mix, and flashbacks seemed like the best way to make that happen. Because otherwise they don't actually see each other until the last few pages, and that was just not right!
Heehee. Thanks for quoting back the bits you liked. Petrelli brother dynamics are fun to play with. Especially when Peter is slutty and Nathan calls him on it. And playing in Dean's inner monologue is fun, because he thinks the most ridiculous things sometimes.
Look forward to hearing what you thought of the next chapter!
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I found her fic, "civilized" via the crossover newsletter, and she linked to your fic here, and that is how I found my way to this as I am usually not in neither of SPN or Heroes fandom (I am right now in love with both shows, the current seasons, but fannishwise I am not very engaged in them).
I am so glad, your sister was linked, otherwise I would not be here!
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