Torchwood Ficlet: Unending

[brieandwine]

First Torchwood Ficlet ever.  Please review. Be brutally honest.  Your opinion matters.

Title:  Unending

Author:  Marianbri aka Rating:  k-t

Shows:  Torchwood, Doctor Who

Characters:  Jack Harkness, Time Vortex

Warnings:  Just the shows in general. All of Torchwood Series 1 and any Doctor Who episode featuring Jack.

Unending

By Marianbri

Pain…

Always Pain…

Sometimes Sharp and Sudden,

Sometimes Flaring and Throbbing,

But, it always starts with pain.

Then, darkness…the Blackest Black,

Unending Silence…Nothingness,

Is that all there is?

Quietness…Stillness…Numbness…Alone,

What?  What is that dim glow?

It’s getting closer.

It pulses…Brightens,

Spark of Life filled with Time

I Bring Life.

No.

I Bring Life.

Please, no.

I Bring Life.

Isn’t this the End?  Can’t I rest now?  Please, I…

I BRING LIFE!!!!

Nerves on Fire,

Lungs Burning,

Pain…there’s always pain.

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