Even without the coffee I'm awake this morning reading this. If this is what a headache does to you; what happens when something worse than a headache comes upon you?? Only kidding, as one who has headaches I am amazed that you can write a chapter as good as this at all. There is so much in this The princess and that crazy motherfucker? What a difference in characterization you give us in just those few words.
I think of Beautiful Brian as I slip into my overcoat... He has balls of steel, I think he could learn how to do it. I gather this means he would make Brian a killer like himself...I could only see that if you put them in a time machine and put them in the old west--I can definitely see Brian as a leader of the pack like Butch and Sundance.
I know I could die in this little revenge scene. I'm okay with that. So long as I don't die alone.
He really loves Teri and Teri is the one person who could make Bob be a different person than he is right now but the sentences above make that a moot point. I have to admit I hope Teri realizes this is a possibility and is ready for Bob and at least he comes out alive....
well, you probably don't want me to write at all if I have worse than a headache. Funny thing, when I am really sick, creativity flees completely. I'm not a person who writes well while puny
I have to add a slight disagreement here Randall...You may say you don't write well puny, but you have written some of your best, in my opinion, when you are just coming off being sick. So while you feel as though you don't you have a talent and being sick doesn't do anything to diminish that.
The princess and that crazy motherfucker?
What a difference in characterization you give us in just those few words.
I think of Beautiful Brian as I slip into my overcoat...
He has balls of steel, I think he could learn how to do it.
I gather this means he would make Brian a killer like himself...I could only see that if you put them in a time machine and put them in the old west--I can definitely see Brian as a leader of the pack like Butch and Sundance.
I know I could die in this little revenge scene. I'm okay with that.
So long as I don't die alone.
He really loves Teri and Teri is the one person who could make Bob be a different person than he is right now but the sentences above make that a moot point. I have to admit I hope Teri realizes this is a possibility and is ready for Bob and at least he comes out alive....
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