Comments | bree_rex: Peace offering

phineas_gatsby in bree_rex

Peace offering

Aug 22, 2006 22:27

I am really, really sorry if anything that I've said has offended anyone. I really just want to write some stories and read some stories, and maybe innocently chat with some people. I don't want to hurt anyone's feelings. Anyway. I just sort of thought of this in the past thirty minutes or so and thought that someone might like to read it ( Read more... )

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juno_chan August 23 2006, 02:52:28 UTC

First of all, I'm sorry that your introduction to this community has been so unpleasant! ^^;; Please don't feel like you have to apologize for sharing your opinion, since it was given in a polite and unoffensive manner.

Anyway, I really enjoyed this. I loved the characterization of Bree, especially, with the mirror adjusting-seat adjusting-never-goes-a-mile-over-the-speed-limit. I thought it definitely rang true.

I loved this dialogue, so simple and sweet and painfully honest.

Beautiful job!

zimbalist August 23 2006, 03:21:25 UTC

i really loved this.

cdsdralion August 23 2006, 03:29:46 UTC

I liked this, it was really good.

Oh and My mom prefers to drive a stick :)

chargrey August 23 2006, 03:50:58 UTC

You know, I've been racking my brain for some Bree/Rex story idea to work with, and you come up with something that, now, seems so obvious. And to top it off, you did it so very well.

I thought that this was very well written. I loved the characterization and details that you put into the physical movements of the characters. They were all just amazingly done, especially if you've only recently started posting fics, or in this fandom.

Look forward to more.

phineas_gatsby August 23 2006, 03:56:23 UTC

Thank you!

I guess I just started thinking...how did she go from, right, get dressed, do my hair, make the bed, and then I'll take my seriously ill husband to the hospital to the emotional wreck she was when he was admitted?

I've dabbled in fanfic before, but not DH. (I only just watched the whole first season on DVD this past month) So thanks again!

audreyfamous August 23 2006, 05:18:40 UTC

Bree who would never even drive 66 miles per hour on the interstates, to the loud honking and angry passing of the cars behind her.

HA! That is just AMAZING. I loved this!!!!!