[Flash Fiction] Your Tears Are My Downfall

Jul 01, 2010 23:16

Title: Your Tears Are My Downfall [Flash Fiction]
Pairing: Onew / Key
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Fluff, Smut (A first try for both!)
Summary: His first sinful time.
Disclaimer: I only own the plot. Thanks to graceful_mind and fabricatedays for helping me with this. :)
A/N: I hope you readers enjoy it. Comments and criticism welcome. This story contains a warning as ( Read more... )

fandom:shinee, rating:nc-17, flash_fiction

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bree_nd July 21 2010, 07:48:39 UTC
I hope it lives up to your expectations. XD

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bree_nd July 23 2010, 07:00:06 UTC
Oh my God! Thank you so much!!! I'm glad you like it! Was nervous cause you write good smut. And I did write it exactly as your perception of who's who. :) For a nice guy, Onew really can be pictured as a sadist. HOW IS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE?! Lol. XD

I'd have to thank my beta-reader for that. She gives the best ideas! :) I'm glad it deflected the sadistic part a little.

Thank you so much for reading and liking it! :) *dances around in joy* I will, hopefully. *blushes* I &hearts you, Dina! :)

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bree_nd July 23 2010, 19:56:40 UTC
Onew Lee Jinki is the biggest oxymoron anyone can ever come across. LOL. XD

And he is loved just the way he is. :)

I shall. I'm working on two smuts as we speak. I apologise in advance cause I'm super slow with writing. *pouts*

*hugs back tightly*

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