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bree_nd

[Short Story] Be the One for Me

Apr 13, 2010 14:52

Title: Be the One for Me [Short Story]
Pairing: Minho / Key
Rating: R / NC-17
Genre: Angst, Rape, Romance
Summary: Key needs someone to be there for him.
Disclaimer: My fictional storyline.
A/N: This is finished for my beta reader, almightymir . Hope you love it, sweetie! To g_odalisque13 , this is in one post. All comments and criticism welcome. As usual, the song ( Read more... )

short_story, fandom:shinee, rating:r, rating:nc-17

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Spot bree_nd April 13 2010, 06:59:17 UTC

For almightymir

Re: Spot almightymir June 16 2010, 13:50:36 UTC

;A; well at least you didn't make the rape so slkdhgklhsdg but still omg my poor bb. D; /squishes him/ i like this! i'm really glad this had a mushy ending, or else i might actually have bawled my eyes out at this fic. XD;

Re: Spot bree_nd June 16 2010, 14:43:52 UTC

Omg! Thank God you like it! I was so worried you wouldn't. :)

I thought it was awkward actually. Heh.

Spot bree_nd April 13 2010, 06:59:59 UTC

For g_odalisque13

Re: Spot g_odalisque13 April 13 2010, 16:57:55 UTC

poor Key! *sobs*
but it was a happy ending, so i am content. lol.
i'm glad that Minho and Jonghyun were there for Key through all of his hardships and that his jerk ex got what he deserved.
this was a very intense story! it sucked me in right away. nice job!

Re: Spot bree_nd April 13 2010, 17:02:02 UTC

Thank you!!! *bows profusely* glad you like it. I thought it was kinda decriptionless? Cause I skip a lot of things in my opinion.
I just had to make sure that Key has friends who care. :)

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bree_nd August 10 2010, 21:54:14 UTC

Oh gosh! Fails! I didn't realise I didn't notice your comment.

Thanks for reading! And I've just realised you've updated You Belong With Me. Shall read and comment soon. :) Sorry for not keeping in touch with you recently. I've been mad busy!

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bree_nd May 5 2010, 09:42:58 UTC

Hmmm, now that you asked, I might write fics of each of them being rape victims. :)

I love Jinki being serious too. :)

As for Jae, I wont be answering questions as to who he is. :) It's up to your own perception. It's okay, you can laugh at it but why did you?

Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

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bree_nd May 5 2010, 19:15:54 UTC

Nah, I don't think you're weird. :)

Well, when the name came up in my mind, I realised all the guys that have the name Jae were nice so I didn't wanna give the impression that any of them were mean. So, yeah.

Truthfully, Jaejoong wasn't the one I had in mind. :)

wykedpanda July 2 2010, 12:48:04 UTC

Indeed, Key deserves someone like Minho :D LOVE LOVE LOVE <3

Big grawr to the other jerk, but at least MinKey came together in the end. :)

Thank you for sharing~

bree_nd July 2 2010, 14:30:54 UTC

You have no idea how happy you've made me! :)

Thank you so much! Love stories should have happy endings. :D

wykedpanda July 3 2010, 04:34:25 UTC

Aw, I'm flattered. But, it's true, the wonders a simple comment can do. :)

Would you mind me friending you? I can give intros if you want :D

bree_nd July 3 2010, 05:47:59 UTC

I don't mind. Friend ahead. :) *clicks friend button* And thank you! That's really nice of you. :)