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faithinthepoor in bree_lynette

Fic

Oct 24, 2006 11:27

Title - Theophobia ( Read more... )

Comments 10

how_i_lie October 24 2006, 11:36:54 UTC

Oooh, this is excellent, so well-written. I love how you tease out the weird Bree logic that makes this all so much more sensible than the actual show!! Brava, and more please xx

faithinthepoor October 30 2006, 09:51:22 UTC

Thank you very, very much! There will be more - it probably won't be immediately but it may well be before February so there is that.

wheelush October 24 2006, 13:26:36 UTC

awesome.

faithinthepoor October 30 2006, 09:51:55 UTC

thanks :)

marciafelicity October 25 2006, 00:32:16 UTC

oh that was wonderful!!!! great job!!

faithinthepoor October 30 2006, 09:52:32 UTC

Ta muchly!

marciafelicity October 31 2006, 20:43:50 UTC

Your very welcome darlin!!!

the_girl_20 October 29 2006, 19:32:48 UTC

Now that the ducks are properly aligned, let's begin.

As per usual, I loved it. Despite having the DVDs for quite some time, I still haven't gotten round to watching season 2 yet. So this is still my canon. I have always been intrigued by the Bree/Danielle relationship on the show and I'm glad that you've brought that in here.

As always, I am thrilled when you write dialogue for the girls. And now I am adding Mrs McCluskey as a person whose dialogue you have down pat. All of her lines were fabulous!

“I already made a pot of coffee for Lynette so that should be fresh. I’ve also hidden all the alcohol.” - She would so get that bit in there.

“It seems you girls have an overvalued impression of your talents in the areas of subtlety and discretion.”As someone stated above, you remain the queen of making what's on screen actually make sense. Because now when I come to watch these eps (and I pretty much know what happens in them anyway) I shall understand both Bree and Lynette's motivations completely, and I won't have to wonder ( ... )

faithinthepoor October 30 2006, 10:03:13 UTC

Now that the ducks are properly aligned, let's begin. Well I wouldn't be beginning if they weren't so I am pleased that you caught yourself and returned order to my little world.

So this is still my canon. And I am still flattered by that fact.

And now I am adding Mrs McCluskey as a person whose dialogue you have down pat. All of her lines were fabulous! I really, really like writing for McCluskey! I am so pleased that I added her into my little series.

I’ve also hidden all the alcohol.” - She would so get that bit in there. You so know that she would!

Because now when I come to watch these eps (and I pretty much know what happens in them anyway) I shall understand both Bree and Lynette's motivations completely, and I won't have to wonder WYF Marc Cherry had been smoking that week. I'm pleased that I could aid in making the show less stressful for you than it was for me - damn you Marc Cherry.

I love that Bree can't bring herself to end it (even if it is partly because she doesn't want Karen and Danielle to overhear a screaming ( ... )

frogfrizz November 29 2006, 08:17:06 UTC

Very well written. The characterization was particularly poignant and the conversation was tight. This was a wonderful piece. :) Hoping to read more Bree/Lynette from you.