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marciafelicity in bree_lynette

My first Brynette fic

Jul 15, 2006 16:02

This is my first ever brynette fic. . . comments would be nice. Hope you guys enoy it.

“Good Morning,” the blonde woman said when she felt the red head move.
“Oh my god, Lynette?”
“Yes Sweetie. What’s the matter?”
“What . . . what happened?”
Lynette sat up on the bed and looked at Bree. “You don’t remember?”
“Well no.”
“Oh well, don’t worry, its ( Read more... )

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bebopbooty July 16 2006, 20:20:27 UTC

Thats pretty good for a first attempt! Well done.

marciafelicity July 16 2006, 20:22:45 UTC

Thanks! Really appreciate it!!

bebopbooty July 16 2006, 20:24:27 UTC

No problem! I want to write a fic but I dont know where to start, my creative writing sucks!

marciafelicity July 16 2006, 20:27:19 UTC

It was really hard for me, b/c my creative writing sucks too!!

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bree_addiction July 16 2006, 20:30:31 UTC

Brilliant!!! You have too continue it!! See I knew you should have posted it!!

marciafelicity July 16 2006, 20:32:56 UTC

Awww!! Thanks!!!
I couldn't find a way to continue. . . I tried.

bree_addiction July 16 2006, 20:34:29 UTC

Awww :( I'm sure you could. You could have Lynette like find out that Tom was cheating or summit lol That Idea came from nowhere.

marciafelicity July 16 2006, 20:39:36 UTC

I will brainstorm about it. . . and try to continue it.

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loveflickalove July 16 2006, 21:00:12 UTC

Aww that was lovely for a first try. I agree, I'd love to read more, it's a great place for a cliffhanger - but I'd love to know Lynette's reaction!

marciafelicity July 16 2006, 21:05:27 UTC

Thanks!! I will try to continue it.

scarlet_amour July 17 2006, 00:41:59 UTC

God. I love your icon. -giggles-

scarlet_amour July 17 2006, 00:42:32 UTC

Lovely story my dear!

marciafelicity July 17 2006, 00:44:49 UTC

Thanks soo much!!

flicka_fan July 17 2006, 02:36:02 UTC

I loved that. I hope you continue.

marciafelicity July 17 2006, 16:36:38 UTC

I'm glad you loved it!!! I am trying to continue it.