Drabble: Change

Mar 02, 2008 22:52

Title: Change
Author: breathless_dawn
Rating: PG
Pairing: J/E (much squinting required)
Word count: 99
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
A/N: Written for this week's drabble prompt at blackpearlsails "I should have...". Unbeta'd. Post AWE

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character: will, drabble, pairing: jack/elizabeth, potc, character: elizabeth

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djarum99 March 3 2008, 06:41:46 UTC
That was lovely! A wonderful perspective on what the cost of those years might be.

Now I want to know what Jack did...

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reneeks March 3 2008, 18:16:59 UTC
Beautiful writing. I'm very curious also. Any way we can talk ya into more to this?

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breathless_dawn March 5 2008, 03:49:23 UTC
Thanks for the read and the comment. I could probably write a continuation, yes :)

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breathless_dawn March 5 2008, 03:48:12 UTC
Thank you so much.

Now I want to know what Jack did...

I could be persuaded write a continuation ;)

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komandant_krech March 3 2008, 18:40:43 UTC
Lovely writing; and what an intriguing piece...

which of them has changed the most, and for whom.

She thinks it looks like Jack’s.

Now this got me wondering who, indeed, has changed for whom. Liz for Jack, or Will for Jack, or Jack for either one/both of them? (Sorry -- I happen to have a certain liking for J/W too, so I couldn't help but to get some slashy vibes from that last sentence.. *g*)

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breathless_dawn March 5 2008, 03:51:02 UTC
Thank ye kindly :)

Ha! I don't write slash, but I do see where you could get that idea hehe.

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ditte3 March 4 2008, 07:38:38 UTC
Love it.

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breathless_dawn March 5 2008, 03:52:58 UTC
Why thank you :)

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breathless_dawn March 11 2008, 02:05:10 UTC
Thank you so much

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sparrows_lass March 5 2008, 14:50:34 UTC
More?!??!!

Please?

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breathless_dawn March 11 2008, 02:06:45 UTC
Thanks for the read and the comment.

More?!??!!

I'm working on it :)

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