Title: Forever, And Everything In-Between
Pairing: Lucas/Barry/Dawn, Riley/Dawn
Summary: It takes her two weeks before she speaks to Riley about what brought her to Iron Island. Ten, twenty, and all the years in-between.
Disclaimer: I don't own Pokemon.
Notes: This was written for the first round of
pokeprompts's March Madness tournament. The prompt was the
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tbh i've never shipped barry/lucas/dawn as a threesome before, but this might change things... oh yes indeed it might o3o
anyways, this is so precious, and so well written! the end especially... ah, be still my heart. &hearts and the way you wrote it out of order really adds a certain je ne sais quoi~
lovely work bb!
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Also, Riley's role wasn't too apparent here, and Dawn seemed a little desperate when she tried to relate Riley to a combination of Lucas and Barry, I felt a tad sad when I read that ;; while I do like how you start and end with Riley's role, I think his part could have been better showcased.
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