pokemon; Always Watching | Paul/Dawn

Mar 14, 2010 21:13

Title: Always Watching
Pairing: Paul/Dawn
Summary: She would say that she watches him when he isn't looking, but that would be always.
Disclaimer: I don't own Pokemon.
Notes: Just a little drabble I wrote back on...Valentine's Day, actually. I'm surprised that this is the first drabble I've written for this pairing, considering that I'm usually the ( Read more... )

pairing: paul/dawn, fandom: pokemon

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Nice job cattygothloli May 10 2010, 23:31:38 UTC
I liked this drabble. The only thing that confused me was this line: Someone who can only insult her on the blue moon he does.
I know what once in a blue moon means, but I don't get what your trying to say with this line. Can you explain?

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Re: Nice job kitsuneasika May 11 2010, 00:38:52 UTC
Thanks for commenting! And yeah, that line gave me a lot of trouble. I was worried that it would be confusing.

It was supposed to link to the sentence before, like this: Someone who doesn't even see her. Someone who can only insult her on the blue moon he does. I was trying to say that he barely noticed her, and when he did, he would only insult her. Does that make sense, now?

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Re: Nice job cattygothloli May 11 2010, 21:41:54 UTC
Yes, it makes sense now. Thanks!

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Re: Nice job kitsuneasika May 12 2010, 04:53:08 UTC
Great! I'm glad that I'm not epic fail at explaining. XD

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