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Jan 09, 2011 08:58

Like my Soul? Hate my Soul? Please to be commenting here. If you're afraid of telling me outright, feel free to post it anonymously.

!hmd, !ooc

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scentofthesoul February 28 2011, 07:06:51 UTC
Hey, I've mostly seen your Soul on D_M a lot and I've hummed and hawwed on whether or not to comment here, but today my shyness has lessened enough. I think he's mostly IC and you have lots of fun plot ideas in your game that I keep meaning check out more because they seem like a lot of fun by what I see you say about them on D_M ^_^. I also play Soul and from one Soul player to another I thought that I should tell you that there are times when I feel like his speech patterns are a little strange. Such as the use of certain slang and swears that aren't used in Japan or America. I believe I once saw that you had him use "bloody" and if that is because you are from the U.K. yourself, I mean no disrespect, but Soul Eater is set in Nevada and unless it's revealed in canon that Soul is from the U.K. originally, it feels off that he would use slang and swears from that region. There are also other more subtle things in how you structure his sentences that feels off. Sometimes I feel like I can hear his voice in your tags, but other times it's hard by the way something is worded and structured. It's funny how little things like that can change everything. Such as conveying his cool way of speaking: he sometimes sounds exasperated and tired with what's going on around him and I find that a good way to convey that is by shortening his words and sometimes even omitting some like "you are" to "you're" or "I'm going to" to "I'm gonna" or "Are you okay?" to "You okay?"

Um, man, I could go on and on and on so I'll stop here. 8)

PS: though you say "feel free to post anonymously," anon commenting is turned off, just so you know!

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brbomnomsouls February 28 2011, 07:20:51 UTC
Nah, it's totes cool. I usually play derps and whatnot so people like Soul aren't really my area. I'm still getting the hang of him, so any advice is awesome, thank you ♥

I also play brbbeincool who attends Hogwarts in an AU setting, so that's probably where the Brit slang comes from (I'm Australian myself).

I'll fix that :|a

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brbomnomsouls February 28 2011, 07:55:46 UTC
XD Sorry I didn't follow up with that tag. I see other Souls and I'm like agh so unsure whether I should tag them or not. I've only been in the fandom for...two months? I watched the entire anime in a week =o=

In all honesty, I've got two other Soul accounts. I think I tagged yours with stillsoulcool as well.

I'll be more than happy to ♥ thanks again!

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scentofthesoul February 28 2011, 08:06:10 UTC
Oh don't worry about it, I get the same way sometimes. I did the same thing last year when I started playing him. Read the manga in four days and was like /makes Soul account and apps at a game.

Hee, great! And no problem!

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