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Daiki's Little Problem

Jul 17, 2009 22:40

Title: Daiki's Little Problem
Author: keeconk
Pairing: TaDaiki
Rating: PG-15
Word count: 4,059
Disclaimer: is currently still praying that they're mine.
Summary: Daiki is a dead sack when he sleeps, and everyone knows that. But lately, since he lives with his boyfriend, he finds it really hard to sleep soundly. He even actually wakes up early, something ( Read more... )

c: takaki yuya, *daiki's little problem, r: pg-15, g: hey!say!jump, !one-shot, c: arioka daiki, p: tadaiki

Comments 56

innocentyetevil July 17 2009, 16:54:28 UTC

Am I first?

innocentyetevil July 17 2009, 17:10:00 UTC

I'm FIRST! Yay!

IT'S PURRRRFECT!!!!

I like the flow of the story, it's relaxing yet addicting. I like the way Daiki's mind works, and the character's interactions and Takaki's character too. And the story is realistic, the kind of problems that new couples would have, about being open to each other and stuff.

The shower moments is great! And Daiki admiting that he's the uke is WIN! Drama queen Daiki and relaxed Takaki is a good combination and the ending is PURRRFECT!

I love u so much for this!!

keeconk July 18 2009, 05:45:27 UTC

Your 'purfect' just simply amuses me, no matter how many times I read it. Lol. And why are u so surprised that u r first? Since u always got to read the unedited one!! Rofl.

Now is ur turn to finish that tadaiki of urs!! Lol!

ednalric July 17 2009, 17:53:45 UTC

I love Tadaiki<33
I love cute/pervert/uke dai chan<33
I extremely love you fic<33

keeconk July 18 2009, 05:53:33 UTC

Yayyy!! Another tadaiki's lover!! And thank you!! Glad u said u love it~. It makes me happy.

ai_star July 17 2009, 18:05:37 UTC

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa........

seriously..kyaaaaaaaaaaaa...so hot yoooo..

OMG...I never though Dai-chan already starting to love Takaki since highschool...

OMG...so romantic.....^_______^

keeconk July 18 2009, 05:59:54 UTC

Never thought of it as hot, bt since you said so then I guess it is then XP~
I actually had planned abt daiki liking him frm high school, but I forgot to put it in last time :P.

funkysparks July 18 2009, 14:30:40 UTC

I scrolled down all the way to the comments first because I wanted to be first. D:

Will go read fic now. XD

keeconk July 18 2009, 14:37:42 UTC

i usually posted it here a day before i posted it else where~.. :P

funkysparks July 18 2009, 14:55:36 UTC

That makes sense. I should watch this community too.

I love pervy Daiki too! ♥ He doesn't look pervy at all, but it's cute to know he's one of the most perverted ones in JUMP. Hahahaha.

And Takaki loves popping into the shower! :D

keeconk July 18 2009, 15:10:48 UTC

He doesnt?! lol.. yeah~.. he doesnt really look like a pervy, but well translations say he is! ROFL..

i wish they do more stuff together on tv.. *cries*..

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clow_reed_sama July 19 2009, 05:05:59 UTC

*o* Daiki mind works all day thinking in Takaki.... the relashionship...

Cute Daiki Pow...

And the hormones are dangerous... ^/)^

keeconk July 19 2009, 05:17:47 UTC

hahahaha.. thank u!! hope u enjoyed it! thank u so much for reading and commenting! ^__^