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Esclave (Chapter 9/13)

May 04, 2011 02:14

Title: Esclave (Chapter 9/13)
Author: keeconk
Pairing: AriYama.
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 2,877
Disclaimer: None of these characters are mine and the story is solely fantasy, totally has nothing to do with the real life persons. Some facts, however, might be based on magazine translations.
Summary: It was hard to adjust to the new routines, and Yamada was ( Read more... )

r: pg-13, g: hey!say!jump, p: ariyama, c: arioka daiki, !multi-chapter, *esclave, c: yamada ryosuke, c: nakajima yuto

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kuramujii May 4 2011, 04:29:00 UTC

Awwww Yuto is so cute <3

keeconk May 4 2011, 05:16:11 UTC

Isn't he? ❤

cherryberrylove May 4 2011, 05:54:24 UTC

“Yeah. Still have the same cheeks,” Yamada chuckled.
Can I pinch your cheeks????

“Are you mental?” Yamada sighed. “Why the hell did you send Yuto to spy on me?”
You sent me to the floor laughing...LoL....somehow I found that's line amusing.

/claps for an update!

keeconk May 4 2011, 06:02:27 UTC

Those cheeks are adorable really XD

LOL. Actually... that's one of those lines that I said the most irl.

Yay for update!!!! :3

cherryberrylove May 4 2011, 06:11:16 UTC

Fully aware of that! But seriously, having someone pinches your cheeks every time he meets you is annoyinggggg. Not to mention sometimes it hurts too :(

OMG you're like my friend. I get that almost every week from her...and now I think I'm going mental anytime soon...LoL

keeconk May 4 2011, 16:40:24 UTC

XDDDD Ikr? You know my face, so you know that I would be one of those cheek-pinching too XD

Are you mental then? XD

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ai_star May 4 2011, 17:06:26 UTC

wooooot..Finally I have time to give comment XD

Yuto is sooo cute!! /flails.

keeconk May 5 2011, 13:26:14 UTC

XDDDDDD

Isn't he? ❤

crazy_otaku911 May 8 2011, 03:33:15 UTC

JUST DATE HIM ALREADY, YOU STUPID IDIOT.

Haha, I can only imagine how hard the beginning part would be though. D: Trying to catch up after all those years. GOOD LUCK YAMADA. ♥

keeconk May 8 2011, 15:03:03 UTC

LOL!!!! DON'T WORRY. SOOOONNNN

Right? I think I'd be totally frustrated if I were him XD

nikasantos May 10 2011, 17:53:17 UTC

no critiques i loveeee it!!! <3
cant wait for your next update which will be...???

keeconk May 11 2011, 03:30:31 UTC

XD It will be this week. Either today (wednesday my time) or tomorrow. :3

nikasantos May 12 2011, 17:20:29 UTC

okkk im glad cause i soooo wanna read what'll happen next!!! ((((:
Cant waittttt!!! <3 can you send me a message when you post please???? *tries her best to give puppies eyes*

keeconk May 13 2011, 03:57:46 UTC

I will :)))

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