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May 16, 2007 19:28

This is my film that I've been working on the last few weeks.

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_TZXbB63-Bg

Be honest, and unmerciful.

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mickdin May 17 2007, 18:13:59 UTC
My comment will be broken up into 2 sections:

1) The suicide pacing didnt really seem off to me, or the asking to leave the field. The dude's face just makes it seem like he's been asked to leave enough times that hes used to it, and the actor who asked him to leave didnt really leave it open ended it was a closing get the fuck out. And the suicide just seems like its logical progression, clearly this dude's troubles and dissapointments didnt start with getting asked to leave the field and missing those strikes, its been going on for a while this just happens to be the breaking day. My only problems are basebally nitpicky. Cleats instead of clunky white shoes would have been good, but would have taken a little away from the smooth foot to foot cut. Also i could be wrong but George looked really uncomfortable with the pitching. It didnt really take much away, but yeah.

2) Kenny fucking Rodgers walked Andruw Jones to end the 1999 NLCS, he's probably as god damned old as that character and i wish his dumb bitch ass would kill his self.

...good job, brian

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