5 ways to go crazy without trying [sga]

Jan 07, 2010 23:07

um. this was not what i expected would happen when i started writing.

the title is not joking, folks )

alternate universes, stargate, 5 things

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kriadydragon January 8 2010, 04:15:08 UTC
Oh, wow. That gave me the shivers.

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bratfarrar January 8 2010, 13:35:46 UTC
Gave me the shivers once I realized what I was writing.

Thanks!

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violeteyedcat January 8 2010, 08:29:34 UTC
Oh my. John and Rodney's are especially heart-rending for me because those are the very traits that I love and admire in them, and they are the things (viewed in another light/experienced in an alternate universe) that damn them.

Splendid.

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bratfarrar January 8 2010, 13:32:39 UTC
It was supposed to be a somewhat lighthearted series of unconnected snippets. But then John got shipped back to earth, and then there wasn't anyone to keep Rodney from blowing himself up, and then Elizabeth had no support system, and no one brought Ronon home, and ...

Well, there wasn't anyone left for Teyla after that.

(Thanks!)

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kensieg January 8 2010, 11:33:54 UTC
Four is Ronon isn't it? Very good but very creepy.

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bratfarrar January 8 2010, 13:34:50 UTC
Yup. It's Ronon. Or was Ronon. By now he's forgotten he actually had a name at some point, that he was a person and not just a Wraith-killer.

Thanks! I wasn't aiming for creepy, but I seem to have landed there pretty solidly. Funny how that happens sometimes.

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lillian13 January 8 2010, 16:22:15 UTC
Logical and scary.

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bratfarrar January 8 2010, 23:07:20 UTC
Thanks! (I think; I'm currently kind of freaked out over the fact that I wrote this, unprompted by anyone or anything except a self-imposed midnight deadline.)

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teh_bug January 9 2010, 23:41:35 UTC
Whoa! I'm impressed! Very awesome! Very creepy! Very realistic! Were SGA a darker show, I could easily see one or both of those happening.

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bratfarrar January 12 2010, 14:59:41 UTC
The best episodes, I think, were the ones that made quite clear how thin was the knife's edge that the expedition balanced on, especially in the early years.

(and i could probably phrase that better, but you get what i'm trying to say, right?)

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