Preferences?
I'm thinking about my stranded thing.
Sam is going to get the chemistry between the guys.
But I want to write one of the guys as clueless.
So. Which one is more fun? A Jack who is self-aware and a Daniel who has never quite realized what is going on between them?
Or a Daniel who is trying to hit Jack with a clue-by-four (to steal an expression from CJ) and a Jack who gets it a beat too late?
In the spirit of Adjustments, I'm tempted not to choose, but to write the same story both ways. But it seems dumb not to just make a decision and pick one.
Though this is not the only problem I am having with this story. For one thing, I am seriously debating character death, which I never do.
Sam is going to get the chemistry between the guys.
But I want to write one of the guys as clueless.
So. Which one is more fun? A Jack who is self-aware and a Daniel who has never quite realized what is going on between them?
Or a Daniel who is trying to hit Jack with a clue-by-four (to steal an expression from CJ) and a Jack who gets it a beat too late?
In the spirit of Adjustments, I'm tempted not to choose, but to write the same story both ways. But it seems dumb not to just make a decision and pick one.
Though this is not the only problem I am having with this story. For one thing, I am seriously debating character death, which I never do.