Kings and Beggars of the World - Part 8

[braincloud2]

Title: Kings and Beggars of the World

Rating: NC-17

Author: braincloud2

Parings: Harry/Louis, ot5

Warnings: Sexual content, unexplained time-travel, and some offensive language.

Disclaimer: I don’t own people. I don’t intend offense. This is fiction.

Word Count: 40,000+

Summary: Harry’s on tour and he feels on top of the world-that is-until he wakes up

Comments

[doublecaramel]

Oh, this is perfection. I'm really enjoying this story so far and how slowly it's progressing. I think it's fascinating to see how the boys would've done x-factor if they had all the insight and experience they have now.

I appreciate that while the boys must seem like epic Gary-stu's to the other competitors (with their confidence, charisma and trained singing skills) they're still as goofy and delightfully childish as before. It's a pleasure to see them interact. I feel you've got them spot on.

I'm also loving the Larry (and now Ziall! My heart! It adores this.).

I have no idea what you're going to go with this and am very curious about it. Will this time-period continue interrupted, will the boys keep 'going back' every two years? That would be terribly angst-y. *cries* I hope they manage to find out what went wrong and return to the present with some valuable life lessons. (Such as Harry and Louis frolicking in the bliss of their forever makes the world a better place).

I also want to see how their life performances go on... Will you be using the songs they covered in X-Factor or will you bring some new ones?

I hope you update soon.

[braincloud2]

Holy moly, wow thank you! I can't believe you like it this much~ I know it's getting more complicated now, and there's so many different things to think about and how everyone would react. I just really love that you like it, and this-
'Such as Harry and Louis frolicking in the bliss of their forever makes the world a better place'
-makes me laugh so much :D Anyway, thank you, I hope you continue to read. X