Kings and Beggars of the World - Part 8

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Title: Kings and Beggars of the World

Rating: NC-17

Author: braincloud2

Parings: Harry/Louis, ot5

Warnings: Sexual content, unexplained time-travel, and some offensive language.

Disclaimer: I don’t own people. I don’t intend offense. This is fiction.

Word Count: 40,000+

Summary: Harry’s on tour and he feels on top of the world-that is-until he wakes up

Comments

[nostravario]

Nonono don’t complete it! Make it last forever! (And I just caught the forever young reference) Long is good, long means time to get it just right and write the kind of fic that you want to write and make everything as good as it has been this far that is what long means. I like the sound of long. Long is my new favourite and I have never ever loved a WIP more than I love the completed fics, but I do now.

Niall being sassy is awesome, and Louis giggling into Zayn’s shoulder is just plain cute ^^

Oh my gosh xD I LOVE Harry’s logic! Let’s convince Zayn that kissing Louis for fun is not shocking by…kissing Zayn ^^ yes!
LOL (I am reviewing this as I go along because I don’t have time to re-read three times like I usually do which is why there are a lot of random capslock and strange incoherent comments, sorry about that) Zayn’ll explain!

Carrots. If you could see the way you make me smile…you’re awesome.

Possessive, confused, sexually frustrated Louis is the best ^^ and the Zarry is adorable!

The hot rushed sexiness that was the bathroom handjob scene was complete brilliance, and I possibly cannot breathe right at this moment half from the sexy half from laughing at the last lines xD

Matt and Aiden’s part was scary though, that had my heart racing, I so hope the boys won’t get in trouble for this time travel thing. Also, can I just say that although I like it when fics explore the logic behind dimensions of time and space or the magic or science behind the change between different ones, I love that this fic is more about the characters and how they’re handling it and their developing relationships.

And the Liam and Zayn in the end there ^^ I love this, I think I might have mentioned it a couple of times, but in case I hadn’t made it absolutely clear: I LOVE THIS! Never stop, you’re brilliant < 3 so much love

[nostravario]

Also, love that Harry is texting his Mum and messes with Zayn for calling his xD and that Harry straddling Zayn in the bedroom mirrors Louis straddling Niall in the bean bag room, and after the ice cream incident I'm getting the feeling young Nialler is having some thoughts, too ;p lovelovelove (and as you can see, though I said I wouldn't re-read, I couldn't help myself).

[braincloud2]

Oh my Goodness, waking up this morning to find you've left all these incredibly nice comments was just~ XD !!! I felt like it was my birthday or Christmas or something <3
Aw! Thank you, I do want to make people happy, but I really can't write it any other way except long, so it makes me very glad that you wouldn't mind it.
I think we should let Harry's logic solve more problems~ the world would be a better place from all the sexy XD
And goodness me, you pick up on all these little nuances I didn't even think were that noticeable like Louis' possessiveness, and just... my cheeks hurt from smiling too hard.
The next couple of parts are going to be so much fun to write because I've been planning it for ages~ I hope you will like it!
This fic forever loves you :D