Fic: Rainbow's Freedom (Shadow Of The Bat Arc) (3/35)

[bradygirl_12]

Title: Rainbow’s Freedom (Shadow Of The Bat Arc) (3/35)
Author: BradyGirl
Pairings/Characters: (this chapter): Clark/Bruce, Alfred
Series Notes: In the 23rd century, Earth is a technologically-advanced society that practices the ancient institution of slavery. The wealthy freeman Bruce Wayne acquires a highly-prized pleasure slave whom has fallen

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[bradygirl_12]

This is such an amazing story. I really can't find enough adjectives to do it justice. So wonderfully vivid and creative. And you've created such a deep, moving relationship between Bruce and Clark. Even more amazing considering the context in which you've placed their relationship.

Thank you, Jeannev! :)

Exploring the Clark/Bruce relationship in this universe is endlessly fascinating.

I found Clark's reactions in this chapter so completely in keeping with the character you've created. The determination not to embarass Bruce again which results him in suffering a terrible beating. And then the desire to be claimed, after being reminded again, brutally, how little power he has over protecting himself.

*nods* He didn't want to disgrace Bruce by being a rebellious slave, and I'm sure he wasn't thrilled with the idea of being dragged back to the whipping post, either. Though if Carl had been seriously physically abusive to Angie, he might have risked it.

You blow my mind with this! I have to go home tonight and make a Clark/Bruce icon. This story has inspired me.

*claps hands in delight* I'd love to see that icon! :)