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starsandsea June 20 2011, 18:14:25 UTC
Awww, this was so lovely, Brady! I loved all the things that Clark could hear, and when you realized just how far away they were, as well. And his thoughts on Bruce and the others were really sweet, too. :)

Thank you for sharing it with us! :)

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bradygirl_12 June 20 2011, 18:42:39 UTC
Awww, this was so lovely, Brady! I loved all the things that Clark could hear, and when you realized just how far away they were, as well. And his thoughts on Bruce and the others were really sweet, too. :)

Thank you for sharing it with us! :)

Thanks, Star! :)

I took the mornings that I'd awakened by the ocean and remembered what kind of sounds I heard. And a full house in the summer? Almost a rite of passage! ;)

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saavikam77 June 20 2011, 19:45:29 UTC
Aww! Such a gorgeous image. :) That sounds like the best way to start a day, for sure. And Bruce certainly needs that peace and tranquility, tempered by having family and friends around. :p

*applauds*

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bradygirl_12 June 20 2011, 22:45:17 UTC
Aww! Such a gorgeous image. :) That sounds like the best way to start a day, for sure.

It's the absolute BEST way to start the day! :)

And Bruce certainly needs that peace and tranquility, tempered by having family and friends around. :p

*applauds*

Yep, no worries or concerns, just sun 'n' fun. :)

Glad you liked this, Saavi! :)

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eternal_moonie June 20 2011, 20:47:31 UTC
AWESOME story!

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bradygirl_12 June 20 2011, 22:57:34 UTC
AWESOME story!

Thanks, Moonie! :)

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patrese1 June 20 2011, 21:50:18 UTC
Sigh! This was just so lovely and it made me feel as if I was at the shore as well!

I love how Clark wants Bruce to have some of the fond experiences he has had in his life. Like the feeling of closeness and intimacy you can only get in small spaces shared with the ones you love.

The sounds of the sea in the early morning is so different than during the day or nightand you write it so beautifully. The sound of the buoy bell, the seagulls cries, the engine of the boat, it is as the rhythm of life itself and it fills the spirit.

Sigh! Lovely, just lovely... Thanks so much Bradygirl!

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bradygirl_12 June 20 2011, 23:01:11 UTC
Sigh! This was just so lovely and it made me feel as if I was at the shore as well!

Thanks, Pat! :)

I love how Clark wants Bruce to have some of the fond experiences he has had in his life. Like the feeling of closeness and intimacy you can only get in small spaces shared with the ones you love.

*nods*

Now, I wouldn't recommend a crowded house 365 days of the year, but for a stay at the beach? It's fun! :)

The sounds of the sea in the early morning is so different than during the day or night and you write it so beautifully. The sound of the buoy bell, the seagulls cries, the engine of the boat, it is as the rhythm of life itself and it fills the spirit.

I always loved the sound of the lobster boats going about their business when you first wake up. The engine is pretty distinct on those boats so you knew it was lobstermen out on the water. :)

Sigh! Lovely, just lovely... Thanks so much Bradygirl!

You're very welcome, m'dear. Great prompt! :)

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ctbn60 June 20 2011, 22:58:58 UTC
Lovely honey. The little simplicities of life are the best!

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bradygirl_12 June 20 2011, 23:02:37 UTC
Lovely honey. The little simplicities of life are the best!

Very true! I enjoy writing about Grand Things, but also the Little Things. :)

Glad you liked, sweets! :)

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