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ilovetobefree June 5 2011, 08:20:35 UTC
Superman’s skills had been needed, until the emerald-tinted sword of the Green Knight had run through no-longer-invulnerable flesh. The orange sun had taken away most of Superman’s strength.
Oh no!

“Superman! Don’t you dare die on me!” Batman pressed hard on the wound, the color draining from his lover’s face. “Don’t you dare!”
Bruce sounded so upset (I don’t blame him though).

“C’mon, Clark, open your eyes,” said Batman in a low voice. “Please don’t leave me.”
Wonder Woman’s heart nearly broke as she heard the desperation in Batman’s voice.
That was heartbreaking.

Aphrodite, do not take Clark way from us, especially Bruce. It would destroy him. Their love is so pure and strong. It is a beacon to the world. Please, do not take Clark!
So true! Losing Clark would be devastating for Bruce.

“Clark,” he whispered. His hand trembled as he tried to staunch the bleeding. “It’ll be all right, Clark. Diana is warding off the enemy, and I’m taking care of you. I’ll always take care of you. Haven’t I always done so? I always will.”
That was so touching! Bruce’s lines made me cry.

Clark winced. “Where’s…Diana?”
“Keeping you safe.” The clang of swords underscored his words.
“Bruce, you have to…help her.”
I loved Clark there. Always so concerned about others and their safety.

Clark’s eyes were that unearthly blue that always tinged Bruce’s soul. He could see the pain lurking in those sapphire depths.
“Unearthly blue” and “sapphire depths” - wonderful description of Clark’s eyes!

“It’ll be okay. We’ll get you back to the base and get you taken care of.”
Clark squeezed Bruce’s hand weakly. “It’ll be okay, Bruce.”
Bruce looked at his lover and Clark’s heart nearly broke.
Oh, Bruce.
Oh Clark! *hugs him*

Diana’s cry of triumph heartened Clark. If their friend could beat back the enemy, they might have a chance.
Diana was absolutely amazing in this story! So brave, so determined to defeat the enemy and help her friends. And I loved how her "cry of triumph" gave Clark new hope.

Bruce cried out as a rock hit him in the back, sending him staggering as Clark whimpered. Gritting his teeth, Bruce kept upright with his precious burden, the smell of Clark’s blood cloying...terrifying.
Poor boys.

He began to drift, desperate to hold on, and Bruce bent down and whispered in his ear, “I’ll be right here.”
“I know,” Clark rasped and let blessed oblivion take him.
Bruce will always be there for Clark! And Clark knows it! Beautiful ending!

Brilliantly written story Brady! Poor Clark being wounded so badly and almost dying in Bruce’s arms and Bruce being so worried for him - that was so touching. And Diana - you wrote her perfectly! I loved the way you wrote thoughts and feelings of Clark, Bruce and Diana. Wonderful job! Thank you so much for sharing this.

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bradygirl_12 June 5 2011, 17:07:13 UTC
“C’mon, Clark, open your eyes,” said Batman in a low voice. “Please don’t leave me.”
Wonder Woman’s heart nearly broke as she heard the desperation in Batman’s voice.
That was heartbreaking.

Bruce is so vulnerable sometimes!

Aphrodite, do not take Clark way from us, especially Bruce. It would destroy him. Their love is so pure and strong. It is a beacon to the world. Please, do not take Clark!
So true! Losing Clark would be devastating for Bruce.

*nods*

He would take it hard.

“Clark,” he whispered. His hand trembled as he tried to staunch the bleeding. “It’ll be all right, Clark. Diana is warding off the enemy, and I’m taking care of you. I’ll always take care of you. Haven’t I always done so? I always will.”
That was so touching! Bruce’s lines made me cry.

Bruce can do that to you!

Clark winced. “Where’s…Diana?”
“Keeping you safe.” The clang of swords underscored his words.
“Bruce, you have to…help her.”
I loved Clark there. Always so concerned about others and their safety.

That's our Clark! :)

Clark’s eyes were that unearthly blue that always tinged Bruce’s soul. He could see the pain lurking in those sapphire depths.
“Unearthly blue” and “sapphire depths” - wonderful description of Clark’s eyes!

Thank you! I do love describing Clark's eyes. :)

Diana’s cry of triumph heartened Clark. If their friend could beat back the enemy, they might have a chance.
Diana was absolutely amazing in this story! So brave, so determined to defeat the enemy and help her friends. And I loved how her "cry of triumph" gave Clark new hope.

She will defend and protect her friends 'til her last drop of blood.

He began to drift, desperate to hold on, and Bruce bent down and whispered in his ear, “I’ll be right here.”
“I know,” Clark rasped and let blessed oblivion take him.
Bruce will always be there for Clark! And Clark knows it! Beautiful ending!

*beams*

Thank you! :)

Brilliantly written story Brady! Poor Clark being wounded so badly and almost dying in Bruce’s arms and Bruce being so worried for him - that was so touching.

These boys do hurt/comfort so well, don't they? :)

And Diana - you wrote her perfectly! I loved the way you wrote thoughts and feelings of Clark, Bruce and Diana. Wonderful job! Thank you so much for sharing this.

Thank you! Diana knew her job and is the best at it. And the three-way POV just clicked. :)

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