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Fic: Coming Of Age (1/1)

Apr 18, 2011 19:58

Title Coming Of Age (1/1)
Author: BradyGirl_12
Pairings/Characters: Dick/Roy, Ollie/Dinah
Genres: AU, Slavefic
Rating: R
Warnings: Sexual comments and very suggestive dancing ( Read more... )

green arrow/black canary, coming of age, dick grayson/roy harper, robin/speedy, fic prompt request, ollie queen/dinah lance

Comments 16

me_ya_ri April 19 2011, 01:49:13 UTC

Nice! Love Dick being Roy's coming of age present and then his slave. Somehow I think he's pretty happy to belong to Roy, even though he doesn't say a thing in this. Great job, Brady!

bradygirl_12 April 19 2011, 16:46:15 UTC

Nice! Love Dick being Roy's coming of age present and then his slave. Somehow I think he's pretty happy to belong to Roy, even though he doesn't say a thing in this. Great job, Brady!

Heh, it must have killed Dick to be silent, but he can communicate with the fab bod of his. ;)

tabru April 19 2011, 01:50:01 UTC

Oh yay! This slavefic promptfest of yours has been so awesome so far!

The best ass I have ever seen!

LOL! Fact! :D :D :D

I love the Camelotian feel of this! (I'm majoring in Medievalist Lit, so this is right up my alley.)

Wonderful job! And the addition of Ollie/Dinah was icing on the cake! <3

bradygirl_12 April 19 2011, 16:49:33 UTC

Oh yay! This slavefic promptfest of yours has been so awesome so far!

Thank you! It's given me a chance to play around with new scenarios. :)

The best ass I have ever seen!

LOL! Fact! :D :D :D

Yes! :)

I love the Camelotian feel of this! (I'm majoring in Medievalist Lit, so this is right up my alley.)

I'm glad it evoked Camelot for you. Seemed to fit. :)

Wonderful job! And the addition of Ollie/Dinah was icing on the cake! <3

Thank you! I enjoy writing them. :)

stillthere4me April 19 2011, 02:06:55 UTC

Absolutely excellent!

XD Oh those comments, that is exactly the type of atmosphere Ollie's court would have.

I love how encouraging Dinah was too... ♥

Very sexy fic overall, I was enthralled just READING about Dick fabulous dancing. I'm surprised poor Roy was able to move at all after such a performance (but I suppose being told he now owned Dick and was going to be able to "come of age" with him is a pretty good motivator)!

bradygirl_12 April 19 2011, 16:53:43 UTC

Absolutely excellent!

XD Oh those comments, that is exactly the type of atmosphere Ollie's court would have.

I love how encouraging Dinah was too... ♥

They would be a ribald bunch! :)

Very sexy fic overall, I was enthralled just READING about Dick fabulous dancing. I'm surprised poor Roy was able to move at all after such a performance (but I suppose being told he now owned Dick and was going to be able to "come of age" with him is a pretty good motivator)!

*laughs*

I'm sure that once he knew that Dick was his, he moved...rather fast! ;)

stillthere4me April 19 2011, 17:24:51 UTC

Really, the atmosphere was perfect for if Oliver Queen was indeed a Lord forced to move to the forest (which that idea I just love... it's a perfect take on why he and his people would take the Green Arrow persona...). Their downtimes would be a cross between Robin Hood's Merry Men and Ancient Greek/Roman parties (which now that I think about it, I guess aren't that different except the Greco-Roman one would have more women ( ... )

bradygirl_12 April 19 2011, 22:49:34 UTC

Ollie as the leader of a band of Merry Men amuses me no end! :)

Dinah is one of my faves for sure! While Diana is my uber-favorite of the DCU, Dinah is right up there. She's sassy and smart and I love watching her do her thing in those fishnets. ;) She would fit right in with the archers!

Heh, I hadn't even realized that Dick hadn't spoken until I finished. It just seemed the right way, because Dick can communicate so well with his body. :)

Dick is very eager to play between the sheets! :)

I think it helped that he sensed that Roy wouldn't hurt him.

I'm glad you enjoyed the descriptions. I really love doing them.

And thank you for the longer response! always appreciated. :)

saavikam77 April 19 2011, 02:28:32 UTC

Wowsa! *fans self*

Now THAT was a feast for the imagination. ^_~ *purrs happily*

bradygirl_12 April 19 2011, 16:55:09 UTC

Wowsa! *fans self*

Now THAT was a feast for the imagination. ^_~ *purrs happily*

*grins*

Glad you enjoyed it, Saavi! :)

ladyblkrose April 19 2011, 03:55:49 UTC

YYYaaayyyyyyyy, my prompt and you did a bang up job with it. I loved the courtly emphasis, the gowns the feel of the intrepid freedom fighters who have taken out time to celebrate life in the midst of war. Very evocative especially when coupled to the sensuousness of Dick's Gypsy dance.
I loved it, the fic was hot and full of promise
Thank you for sharing and I am bouncing here for reals

bradygirl_12 April 19 2011, 17:03:16 UTC

YYYaaayyyyyyyy, my prompt and you did a bang up job with it. I loved the courtly emphasis, the gowns the feel of the intrepid freedom fighters who have taken out time to celebrate life in the midst of war. Very evocative especially when coupled to the sensuousness of Dick's Gypsy dance.

Your prompt was most inspiring, m'lady! :)

I love writing Dick dancing. He's just a natural. :)

I loved it, the fic was hot and full of promise
Thank you for sharing and I am bouncing here for reals

I'm glad you liked it! :)