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grand_duc January 13 2011, 01:21:44 UTC
Nice chapter. Nopt much by the way of plot but it set a lot in term of ambience and background.

Loved Diana,s comment of Dick having gravitas under the sparckle. Very true to his character.

I think I caught a typo:
Diana smiled. “It is a beautiful morning. You suit it will.”

should that be well?

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bradygirl_12 January 13 2011, 01:35:55 UTC
Nice chapter. Nopt much by the way of plot but it set a lot in term of ambience and background.

Thanks! I like to do 'mood pieces' to set the tone. :)

Loved Diana,s comment of Dick having gravitas under the sparckle. Very true to his character.

She reads him right! :)

I think I caught a typo:
Diana smiled. “It is a beautiful morning. You suit it will.”

should that be well?

Thanks! Fixed!

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lynx212 January 13 2011, 01:27:27 UTC
great setting of the scene/story here I can't wait to see where this goes ^_^

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bradygirl_12 January 13 2011, 01:41:23 UTC
great setting of the scene/story here I can't wait to see where this goes ^_^

Thank you! Hopefully I can get into a posting rhythm that goes faster this year. :)

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lynx212 January 13 2011, 01:48:36 UTC
You are welcome and you can do it!! Just set a comfortable pace and if life allows "schedule in" some writing time. I have been using the early hours before the family gets up to do my writing *giggles* Either way know we well wait for this no matter the time frame. *hugs*

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bradygirl_12 January 13 2011, 17:11:11 UTC
You are welcome and you can do it!! Just set a comfortable pace and if life allows "schedule in" some writing time. I have been using the early hours before the family gets up to do my writing *giggles* Either way know we well wait for this no matter the time frame. *hugs*

Aww, thanks! :)

I used to pose these arcs a lot quicker. I just got out of the habit, and then holiday stories took over. I think January is a good time to get back into RF rhythm. :)

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ctbn60 January 13 2011, 01:52:08 UTC
Wonderful I love seeing these peeks into Diana and her relationships and it was wonderful to see her get along so well with Dick. He does sparkle. I was so happy to see this posted. I adore this story.

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bradygirl_12 January 13 2011, 17:15:14 UTC
Wonderful I love seeing these peeks into Diana and her relationships and it was wonderful to see her get along so well with Dick. He does sparkle.

Dick always sparkles! :) And Diana is an excellent observer.

I was so happy to see this posted. I adore this story.

*beams*

Thank you, C.! :)

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amcnh January 13 2011, 01:57:25 UTC
Wonderful chapter! I look forward to your next update. The interaction with Dick and Diana divine. Bravo!

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bradygirl_12 January 13 2011, 17:21:51 UTC
Wonderful chapter! I look forward to your next update. The interaction with Dick and Diana divine. Bravo!

Thank you! I always thought that there should be more Diana/Dick interaction. They are bright, optimistic people in a world where it's difficult to be (whether in canon or this AU). Diana can recognize true charm and Dick would find her fascinating. :)

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imagined_away January 13 2011, 02:18:54 UTC
Yay another chapter of Rainbow's Freedom! :D

I love their relationship. The three of them fit together so well and I'm glad you've included poly relationships in the story.
Though it definitely fits with Diana's heritage. Amazons are a lot more open than most people.

Dick is definitely suited to bright mornings, though he'd probably brighten any day.
I don't remember exactly, slaves are allowed to go trick-or-treating at houses that allow slaves to come to their door right? Sorry, I get a bit lost sometimes trying to keep everything straight >>
I can't wait to see what the kids' costumes are!

Great chapter! It's almost Halloween, easily the best holiday we get to see Gotham celebrate.

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bradygirl_12 January 13 2011, 17:26:38 UTC
Yay another chapter of Rainbow's Freedom! :D

*grins*

I love their relationship. The three of them fit together so well and I'm glad you've included poly relationships in the story.
Though it definitely fits with Diana's heritage. Amazons are a lot more open than most people.

I like the idea of a poly relationship. It's got different dynamics than the usual twosome, and is fun to play with. And it fits right in with Amazon thinking! :)

Dick is definitely suited to bright mornings, though he'd probably brighten any day.

Very true! In Gotham, he gets to brighten a LOT of days. ;)

I don't remember exactly, slaves are allowed to go trick-or-treating at houses that allow slaves to come to their door right? Sorry, I get a bit lost sometimes trying to keep everything straight >>

You are correct! There are houses that allow it and those who don't, and I'll probably mention some kind of sign that allows trick-or-treaters to know which is which. Let's just say the Caldwell house is probably not. ;)

I can't wait to see what the kids' ( ... )

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