Fic: Christmas Eve Magic Trilogy: (Book I): Under The Mistletoe (1/1)

[bradygirl_12]

Title: Christmas Eve Magic Trilogy: (Book I): Under The Mistletoe (1/1)
Author: BradyGirl_12
Pairings/Characters: Lois/Tess, Clark/Ollie
Continuity: SmallvilleGenres: Challenge, First Time, Holiday, Romance

Comments

[nrrrdy_grrrl]

I heartchew santa

[bradygirl_12]

I heartchew santa

Christmas sap is the best! ;)

[svgurl]

I read this a few times already and I just can't wipe the big smile off my face. I seriously don't know how you do it! I swear, your fic is one of the ones I've been looking forward to most and you still managed to surpass all my expectations! It was GENIUS, from beginning to end.

A story with both Lois/Tess and Clark/Ollie? FTW! I love that you had it all in Tess's POV- you really have a great Tess voice. I could hear her in my head. Loved the sexy Lois/Tess moment in the beginning.

The Christmas party scenes were perfect. I really like Tess being jealous and slightly possessive ... I have a thing for both of those in stories, I can't deny it.

Plus Lois & Tess setting up Clark & Ollie? LOVE. Their kiss was just perfect and I could imagine them all blushing before it.

“Don’t worry, Smallville, it’s the 21st century. Guys can kiss guys.”The dialogue was awesome but that line especially cracked me up. I could picture Lois saying it all too easily

[bradygirl_12]

I read this a few times already and I just can't wipe the big smile off my face. I seriously don't know how you do it! I swear, your fic is one of the ones I've been looking forward to most and you still managed to surpass all my expectations! It was GENIUS, from beginning to end.

*beams*

Thanks, hon! I'm glad the story pleased you. I had the first draft done for awhile and tweaked it the last couple of days. :)

A story with both Lois/Tess and Clark/Ollie? FTW!

First time writing both! :)

I love that you had it all in Tess's POV- you really have a great Tess voice. I could hear her in my head. Loved the sexy Lois/Tess moment in the beginning.

I'm glad to hear that! Since it's my first time writing her, it's good to hear. :)

The Christmas party scenes were perfect. I really like Tess being jealous and slightly possessive ... I have a thing for both of those in stories, I can't deny it.

Me, too. A little bit of jealousy is fun. :)

Plus Lois & Tess setting up Clark & Ollie? LOVE. Their kiss was just perfect and I could imagine

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I've already written the second part of the trilogy. Very sappy! ;)
That's very exciting news! I can't wait to read it. :D

You should post this to sassandbrass. It's a Lois/Tess comm and we could always use more activity. Only if you want though! :D

BTW, does the hiatus start next week for Smallville? Do you know how long it will last?
It does. Tonight was the mid-season finale. The show returns on January 28th.

[bradygirl_12]

I'll give that comm a look when I get a chance. Definitely sounds interesting! :)

Thanks for the hiatus info! :)

[ladyblkrose]

Oh baby that was so very sweet and I'm not a SV fan.
Thank you for sharing this sweet holiday fluffy fic.

[bradygirl_12]

Oh baby that was so very sweet and I'm not a SV fan.

Thanks for reading even though you're not a fan. :)

Thank you for sharing this sweet holiday fluffy fic.

You're very welcome, m'dear! :)

[saavikam77]

Awwww!!

This was absolutely adorable. ^___^ I love it when Clark and Ollie are utterly clueless, and the girls manage to save the day and get them past their awkward pining. :p

*applauds*

[bradygirl_12]

Awwww!!

This was absolutely adorable. ^___^ I love it when Clark and Ollie are utterly clueless, and the girls manage to save the day and get them past their awkward pining. :p

*applauds*

Thanks, Saavi! :)

I had a fun time writing light-hearted Smallville, and clueless boys are the best! ;)

[jlvsclrk]

That was fun - Lois and Tess are very clever matchmakers!

[bradygirl_12]

That was fun - Lois and Tess are very clever matchmakers!

You just know that they'd be good at it! :)