Comments | bradygirl_12: Fic: Angels' Tears (1/1)

bradygirl_12

Fic: Angels' Tears (1/1)

Aug 10, 2010 22:25

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emergency!, angels' tears, roy desoto/johnny gage

Comments 8

msp_hacker August 12 2010, 05:32:19 UTC

I'm not entirely sure that this worked. Some places it was hard to discern exactly what was being described.

bradygirl_12 August 12 2010, 16:47:44 UTC

I'm not entirely sure that this worked. Some places it was hard to discern exactly what was being described.

Yeah, that's the trouble with writing with symbolism. Sometimes you leave people confused! But thanks for letting me know. I can make a note of that for improvement.

ava_jamison September 21 2010, 12:46:36 UTC

Lovely cover, BG! It's really fantastic! And I think your imagery works very well for this. Harrowing, but it would be. And his bravery is beautiful. I like the point about panic being the real enemy for a hero like a firefighter.

bradygirl_12 September 21 2010, 17:45:48 UTC

Lovely cover, BG! It's really fantastic!

ctbn60 is very talented, isn't she? :)

And I think your imagery works very well for this. Harrowing, but it would be.

Thank you! Poor Johnny's mind was all jumbled as he suffered, but he knew that his Angel would save him.

And his bravery is beautiful. I like the point about panic being the real enemy for a hero like a firefighter.

*nods*

If a firefighter panics, all is lost. The fear has to be clamped down tightly. It's the only way to do that job!

Thanks for commenting, Ava! This is one of my favorite pieces, and now I have a lovely cover to go with it! :)

lilacs_roses November 9 2011, 06:31:11 UTC

bradygirl_12 November 9 2011, 19:28:21 UTC

Yes, I did enjoy this but... I've never been good with interpreting symbols and such. I can only guess that Johnny died in this fire and that Roy had died some time before...

But, it was well done though :)

Thank you, Rose :)

It can be interpreted any way you wish. You can interpret it as Johnny dying in the fire and Roy already gone, or Johnny being saved and badly burned, living in the burn ward now and Roy visiting him (or already dead). I deliberately wrote it without a definitive ending. :)

kcs_slayve April 23 2012, 20:12:43 UTC

What we are left with is how strong the connection is between Johnny and Roy.

Johnny is mortally wounded (or damn near as to make no difference) and Roy comes to him.

Whether or not Roy is actually with John is open to interpretation.

The point is this.

Johnny believes.

bradygirl_12 April 23 2012, 23:41:48 UTC

What we are left with is how strong the connection is between Johnny and Roy.

*nods*

Johnny is mortally wounded (or damn near as to make no difference) and Roy comes to him.

Whether or not Roy is actually with John is open to interpretation.

The point is this.

Johnny believes.

Beautiful way of putting it.