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jeannev February 11 2010, 03:14:12 UTC
Ahem, Well, I think I'm a little speechless at this chapter. Its so interesting to see that little competitive streak come out with Clark. Not to mention indulging his kink a bit in public.

Very hot, very sexy, but also very loving and very tender.

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bradygirl_12 February 11 2010, 03:24:34 UTC
Ahem, Well, I think I'm a little speechless at this chapter. Its so interesting to see that little competitive streak come out with Clark. Not to mention indulging his kink a bit in public.

*laughs*

I guess Clark figures, ya got it, flaunt it! ;)

Very hot, very sexy, but also very loving and very tender.

Ooh, I'm glad you said that, Val! I was hoping to get that balance right. :)

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ctbn60 February 11 2010, 03:33:10 UTC
Whoa!! Wow this banquo was certainly worth waiting for and Clark really did pleasure his master and I love his sense of competition! Lovely and amazing and extremely HOT chapter babe! I will have lovely images in my mind tonight that's for sure!

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bradygirl_12 February 11 2010, 03:41:47 UTC
Whoa!! Wow this banquo was certainly worth waiting for and Clark really did pleasure his master and I love his sense of competition! Lovely and amazing and extremely HOT chapter babe! I will have lovely images in my mind tonight that's for sure!

*grins*

I'm glad you enjoyed, C.! And having sexy images in one's head before bedtime? How cool is that? ;)

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ranger_girl0301 February 11 2010, 03:38:07 UTC
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmm

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bradygirl_12 February 11 2010, 03:42:38 UTC
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmm

*laughs*

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issuesgrrrl February 11 2010, 04:43:36 UTC
Jeebus!!! Hope Clark got bonus points from the East German Judge for sticking that dismount... ;^P

::fans self, reaches for a cool drink on my way to a nice lie-down...::

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bradygirl_12 February 11 2010, 17:48:39 UTC
Jeebus!!! Hope Clark got bonus points from the East German Judge for sticking that dismount... ;^P

*laughs*

::fans self, reaches for a cool drink on my way to a nice lie-down...::

A nice, tall, cool drink. ;)

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patrese1 February 11 2010, 05:32:14 UTC
Lovely! I have been waiting for the Banquo.

I love that you gives us the names of the different pieces of their attire. It really does a lot in conveying the sensuousness of the setting.

Clark's competitiveness in wanting to be the best pleasure slave for his Prince is wonderful.

Even in this public setting, they weave a cocoon of intimacy with the tenderness they show one another.

Whew! Is it a little warm in here? ;)

Thanks so much!

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bradygirl_12 February 11 2010, 17:53:27 UTC
Lovely! I have been waiting for the Banquo.

I'm such a tease! ;)

I love that you gives us the names of the different pieces of their attire. It really does a lot in conveying the sensuousness of the setting.

Thank you! I like playing around with language and making it sound exotic. :)

Clark's competitiveness in wanting to be the best pleasure slave for his Prince is wonderful.

In the end, he just couldn't help it! ;)

Even in this public setting, they weave a cocoon of intimacy with the tenderness they show one another.

Exactly!

Whew! Is it a little warm in here? ;)

Thanks so much!

You're welcome, m'dear!

Oh, and I just finished the first draft of your story today. Needs some polishing but it should be up by the deadline, February 14th. I think I did quite well with it! :)

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