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bradygirl_12

Fic: Candy-Colored Ribbons (1/1)

Dec 03, 2009 20:10

Title: Candy-Colored Ribbons (1/1 ( Read more... )

zatanna, wonder woman, clark kent/bruce wayne, ollie queen/dinah lance, superman/batman, green arrow/black canary, diana prince, wfge, jla

Comments 38

ctbn60 December 4 2009, 01:36:16 UTC

Aw, so nice! They were always meant to be no matter what the obstacles! Loved it well done.

bradygirl_12 December 4 2009, 01:40:37 UTC

Aw, so nice! They were always meant to be no matter what the obstacles! Loved it well done.

Thank you, C.! :)

Even without memories, they are drawn to each other like magnets! ;)

imagined_away December 4 2009, 01:47:23 UTC

:D
yay!

This is adorable. And I love Zantana's comment about the rumors. Clark and Bruce are just so perfect for each other. Someone has to tame the "boy scout" in Clark and no one else could deal with Bruce that much and still love him.

bradygirl_12 December 4 2009, 01:51:08 UTC

:D
yay!

This is adorable.

Thank you, m'dear! :)

And I love Zantana's comment about the rumors.

You know how superheroes love to gossip. ;)

Clark and Bruce are just so perfect for each other. Someone has to tame the "boy scout" in Clark and no one else could deal with Bruce that much and still love him.

Perfect description of the two of them! :)

reginalibintia December 4 2009, 02:04:58 UTC

“Are we lovers?” Clark asked.

Bruce looked up to meet Clark’s eyes.

“Do you want to be?”

I just loved that part because he would always answer with a question. Wonderfully done.

bradygirl_12 December 4 2009, 02:52:00 UTC

"Are we lovers?" Clark asked.

Bruce looked up to meet Clark’s eyes.

"Do you want to be?"

I just loved that part because he would always answer with a question. Wonderfully done.

True, very Bat-like! ;)

ladyblkrose December 4 2009, 02:20:30 UTC

No matter what the situation, memory, no memory, on or off planet, Bruce and Clark are as inevitable as the tides. I loved the way you showed their implied relationship via their actions. It was so clear that even an memory impaired Clark could see it clearly. I loved the lines,
“Are we lovers?” Clark asked.
Bruce looked up to meet Clark’s eyes.
“Do you want to be?”
Perfect.
Thank you for sharing.
LBR

bradygirl_12 December 4 2009, 02:59:43 UTC

No matter what the situation, memory, no memory, on or off planet, Bruce and Clark are as inevitable as the tides.

Absolutely! :)

I loved the way you showed their implied relationship via their actions. It was so clear that even an memory impaired Clark could see it clearly. I loved the lines,
"Are we lovers?” Clark asked."
Bruce looked up to meet Clark’s eyes.
"Do you want to be?"
Perfect.
Thank you for sharing.
LBR

You're very welcome, m'lady! :)

It was great fun to write! :)

northern_star December 4 2009, 04:52:51 UTC

aww! *sniffles* so sweet. :)

I really like Bruce's reply "Do you want to be?" -- looks like he's leaving it up to Clark, but in a way he's also saying "I will, if you will."

And of course they would remember one another, even if they don't really. Because there are things that are stronger then memory alone. It's not just your mind, it's your heart and all your senses that know and recognize a person that you love so deeply.

Beautiful little moments in this. Thanks for sharing with us!

bradygirl_12 December 4 2009, 18:33:37 UTC

aww! *sniffles* so sweet. :)

Thank you! :)

I really like Bruce's reply "Do you want to be?" -- looks like he's leaving it up to Clark, but in a way he's also saying "I will, if you will."

Hedging his bets. ;)

And of course they would remember one another, even if they don't really. Because there are things that are stronger then memory alone. It's not just your mind, it's your heart and all your senses that know and recognize a person that you love so deeply.

Beautifully said! :)

Beautiful little moments in this. Thanks for sharing with us!

You're very welcome, m'dear! :)