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ilovetobefree October 29 2009, 21:07:00 UTC
And the sweets!
I love sweets. :)

He took a bite, the rich, spicy flavor crystallizing on his tongue, the sprinkle of cinnamon sweet and luscious.
Awwwww, such an amazing description!

“Exceptional.” Clark sighed in gustatory satisfaction. “Right, Pumpkin?”
Bruce’s eyes glittered. “Right, Muffin.”
Great dialogue. :)

He tasted Bruce.
Even yummier than a pumpkin muffin.
And lovely ending. :)

Thanks for the wonderful story!:)
LS.

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bradygirl_12 October 29 2009, 21:56:39 UTC
And the sweets!
I love sweets. :)

:)

He took a bite, the rich, spicy flavor crystallizing on his tongue, the sprinkle of cinnamon sweet and luscious.
Awwwww, such an amazing description!

Thank you! :)

"Exceptional." Clark sighed in gustatory satisfaction. "Right, Pumpkin?"
Bruce’s eyes glittered. "Right, Muffin."
Great dialogue. :)

*grins*

He tasted Bruce.
Even yummier than a pumpkin muffin.
And lovely ending. :)

Thanks for the wonderful story!:)
LS.

Glad you enjoyed, Lis! :)

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saavikam77 October 29 2009, 21:11:02 UTC
Heee!! XD Completely adorable! I had almost forgotten I'd prompted you for this, so it was such a great surprise for me today. :) Thank you so much!!

*contemplates pumpkin muffins* ^_~

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bradygirl_12 October 29 2009, 22:03:26 UTC
Heee!! XD Completely adorable! I had almost forgotten I'd prompted you for this, so it was such a great surprise for me today. :) Thank you so much!!

Glad you enjoyed it, Saavi! :)

Yep, sometimes it takes me awhile to fulfill the prompt requests, but I never forget 'em! :)

*contemplates pumpkin muffins* ^_~

Mmm. I think I'll pick one up at Dunkin' Donuts tomorrow. :)

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bradygirl_12 October 29 2009, 22:07:14 UTC
I think my brain exploded... just a little. XD

LOL!

Oh wow, this was such a treat ^_^ Food, Clark, Bruce and Halloween *licks lips* Excellent job Brady!!

Mmm, all my favorite things! :)

Glad you liked this, Zenith! :)

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bradygirl_12 October 30 2009, 00:28:11 UTC
So sweet! Such a lovely holiday treat.

Your dialogue skills were really well done.

*beams*

Thank you, Pervy! :)

Halloween should have plenty of treats. And tricks. ;)

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ctbn60 October 29 2009, 23:47:05 UTC
I love the delightful pictures your words paint. They take me into a wonderful world and distract me and I really like that! Thank you!

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bradygirl_12 October 30 2009, 00:31:24 UTC
I love the delightful pictures your words paint. They take me into a wonderful world and distract me and I really like that! Thank you!

I'm so glad, C.! We all need distraction at times. :)

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