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jeannev October 14 2009, 02:15:26 UTC
YES! I knew Lionel would be part of the solution. And I was hoping that Melody would too.

Run Bruce! Fast!!

Can you post the next chapter in about 5 minutes or so? I don't think I can wait.

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bradygirl_12 October 14 2009, 02:34:59 UTC
YES! I knew Lionel would be part of the solution. And I was hoping that Melody would too.

Sometimes the simple solutions are the best. :)

Run Bruce! Fast!!

Yes, very fast!

Can you post the next chapter in about 5 minutes or so? I don't think I can wait.

*grins*

Not in five minutes, but I'll do my best! ;)

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jeannev October 14 2009, 02:57:18 UTC
OK, I'll give you 15 minutes, but only because I'm feeling very generous.

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bradygirl_12 October 14 2009, 03:41:25 UTC
OK, I'll give you 15 minutes, but only because I'm feeling very generous.

LOL! Okay! :)

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On track skeptic7 October 14 2009, 02:59:04 UTC
They are all going off to look at the right place!. Between Lionel, Ollie, and Bruce there is enough power and enough anger to make Edmund and his disgusting sons disappear completely. Bruce can kill them and Lionel can take the bodies off world and dump them into the sun, and Ollie can destroy the cabin.

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Re: On track bradygirl_12 October 14 2009, 03:42:44 UTC
On track
They are all going off to look at the right place!. Between Lionel, Ollie, and Bruce there is enough power and enough anger to make Edmund and his disgusting sons disappear completely. Bruce can kill them and Lionel can take the bodies off world and dump them into the sun, and Ollie can destroy the cabin.

The Justice League of Revenge! :)

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anonymous October 14 2009, 03:34:03 UTC
FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am so happy... ^______^

Poor Bruce seems exhausted. I like how Luthor is affectionate with Jaime.

I was having a real crap night before I decided to check this fanfic. I just realized I have 100 pages to read about Shakespeare's life by tomorrow morning, on top of other work that I had planned on doing. So...thank you for the study break. :)

I'm not sure I can wait even 5 minutes for the next installment. But... I guess ol' Shakespeare will keep me company... *sad puppy face*

trick_trumpet

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bradygirl_12 October 14 2009, 03:46:07 UTC
FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am so happy... ^______^

Glad to cheer you up! :)

Poor Bruce seems exhausted. I like how Luthor is affectionate with Jaime.

You know that Bruce would run himself ragged, and Lex loves Jamie like crazy even if he hasn't quite admitted it to himself yet. :)

I was having a real crap night before I decided to check this fanfic. I just realized I have 100 pages to read about Shakespeare's life by tomorrow morning, on top of other work that I had planned on doing. So...thank you for the study break. :)

You're very welcome! :)

I'm not sure I can wait even 5 minutes for the next installment. But... I guess ol' Shakespeare will keep me company... *sad puppy face*

trick_trumpet

Shakespeare's life is pretty interesting! Though admittedly Clark and Bruce are more fun. ;)

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issuesgrrrl October 14 2009, 04:24:36 UTC
Oh, Thank Bubastis and All Her Cats! Finally! Wouldn't there be property tax/ construction permit records as well? And we do have to get those sick bastard Caldwells caught on tape with irrefutable evidence that will hold in court... THEN we go to town with the tire irons and the turpentine... unless you had in mind for Clark to re-acquire some of his Kryptonian heritage instead, like heat vision and super-strength! Those are good ones, we like those...

Write faster dangnabit! ::wibbles more!::

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bradygirl_12 October 14 2009, 04:42:09 UTC
Oh, Thank Bubastis and All Her Cats! Finally! Wouldn't there be property tax/ construction permit records as well? And we do have to get those sick bastard Caldwells caught on tape with irrefutable evidence that will hold in court... THEN we go to town with the tire irons and the turpentine... unless you had in mind for Clark to re-acquire some of his Kryptonian heritage instead, like heat vision and super-strength! Those are good ones, we like those...

On to the rescue! :)

Write faster dangnabit! ::wibbles more!::

*grins*

Glad you're enjoying this, m'dear! :)

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A true and gentle heart receives back love it has given anonymous October 14 2009, 04:32:16 UTC
Fanfare!!! Brass band playing ( ... )

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Re: A true and gentle heart receives back love it has given bradygirl_12 October 14 2009, 04:51:17 UTC
A true and gentle heart receives back love it has given
Fanfare!!! Brass band playing!!!!

*laughs happily*

Boy, you sure know how to write so that we get a rush of adrenaline. The tips and conversations were going back and forth so fast that my heart started pounding. And yet, it only takes one hint to trip someone in the group to remember something important. I'm glad it was Lionel. He could stand to redeem himself. Or perhaps he was also a bit disgusted with Edmund.

Lionel isn't pure evil in this universe. He's got his good points. ;)

And what did everything hinge on...? The tip from a slave in Edmund Caldwells household probably remembering how Clark took a beating for stopping a slave from being hurt and humiliated. Clark took the risk out of respect for another slave and paid dearly for it. While the slave that called it in wasn't the one rescued, she did call Melody to pass on the observation. So, Clark's selfless deed may be the reason he'll be saved.Hmm, that's a good motivation indeed for a Caldwell slave to risk her ( ... )

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