I like this Happily Ever After - gives me warm fuzzies. :)
You wrapped this chapter up very neatly - I can feel how lonely and sad poor Mel is in the beginning - he's lost everything that he once thought was important because of Dillinger. You would think that he'd push him away when Johnny finally returned. But then they're in love, and love isn't logical. :)
Wonderful job, sweetie. I can't wait to see what you have next up your sleeve!
I like this Happily Ever After - gives me warm fuzzies. :)
*grins*
I could have made it a sad ending, but even when I started this, I had this ending in mind. :)
You wrapped this chapter up very neatly - I can feel how lonely and sad poor Mel is in the beginning - he's lost everything that he once thought was important because of Dillinger. You would think that he'd push him away when Johnny finally returned. But then they're in love, and love isn't logical. :)
Very true! :) Mel's in love and he can't fault Johnny for losing everything. I'm just glad it turned out all right for both of them. :)
Wonderful job, sweetie. I can't wait to see what you have next up your sleeve!
*beams*
Thank you, dear! :)
I have LOTS of bunnies, most of them written but needing revision. Also I don't think people would appreciate a flood of stories all at once, LOL! I do have two entries for the Halloween Challenge and a possible third! *excited*
Thank you! It's amazing what you find when you're bored & trolling the internet for random images to make icons out of. :) Or going through the gazillion icon communities on LJ!
Thank you! It's amazing what you find when you're bored & trolling the internet for random images to make icons out of. :) Or going through the gazillion icon communities on LJ!
*grins*
I'm going to do a search for Victorian Halloween images so that I can use one for my default next month.
And speaking for me personally - flood away!
There will be at least a trickle this weekend, I hope! ;)
You made me cry again :) And it is a good thing, you know.
Aww! But I'm glad it was for a good reason. :)
Gotta say I'm happy you killed Billie :D Eeh I feel pretty cruel to say so but I don't like her that much.
Oh, I like her, but sometimes I just want to write the boys together. :)
I kinda hoped sad ending for this fic but then again.. I'm so happy for Melvin cuz he was so lonely plus our boys are so cute together I'm not really complaining! :D
You're right, sometimes sad is better, but this one said 'happy' to me. :)
And btw, extra points for the poems at the beginning of every chapter; they are awesome, especially the last one was perfect.
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I'm looking forward to more arcs with these boys and especially a continuation of the Trytych series because they do make a delicious threesome.
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I know, but I had to do it. ;)
I'm looking forward to more arcs with these boys and especially a continuation of the Trytych series because they do make a delicious threesome.
I have the first draft written of the second part of the trilogy. I just need to find time to revise and type it! :)
Thanks for reading and commenting on this epic, Velvet! I really appreciate it, and am glad you enjoyed it. :)
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You wrapped this chapter up very neatly - I can feel how lonely and sad poor Mel is in the beginning - he's lost everything that he once thought was important because of Dillinger. You would think that he'd push him away when Johnny finally returned. But then they're in love, and love isn't logical. :)
Wonderful job, sweetie. I can't wait to see what you have next up your sleeve!
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*grins*
I could have made it a sad ending, but even when I started this, I had this ending in mind. :)
You wrapped this chapter up very neatly - I can feel how lonely and sad poor Mel is in the beginning - he's lost everything that he once thought was important because of Dillinger. You would think that he'd push him away when Johnny finally returned. But then they're in love, and love isn't logical. :)
Very true! :) Mel's in love and he can't fault Johnny for losing everything. I'm just glad it turned out all right for both of them. :)
Wonderful job, sweetie. I can't wait to see what you have next up your sleeve!
*beams*
Thank you, dear! :)
I have LOTS of bunnies, most of them written but needing revision. Also I don't think people would appreciate a flood of stories all at once, LOL! I do have two entries for the Halloween Challenge and a possible third! *excited*
BTW, you have the loveliest icons! :)
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Thank you! It's amazing what you find when you're bored & trolling the internet for random images to make icons out of. :) Or going through the gazillion icon communities on LJ!
And speaking for me personally - flood away!
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Thank you! It's amazing what you find when you're bored & trolling the internet for random images to make icons out of. :) Or going through the gazillion icon communities on LJ!
*grins*
I'm going to do a search for Victorian Halloween images so that I can use one for my default next month.
And speaking for me personally - flood away!
There will be at least a trickle this weekend, I hope! ;)
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Thank you, Angel! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and commenting. :)
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Aww! But I'm glad it was for a good reason. :)
Gotta say I'm happy you killed Billie :D Eeh I feel pretty cruel to say so but I don't like her that much.
Oh, I like her, but sometimes I just want to write the boys together. :)
I kinda hoped sad ending for this fic but then again.. I'm so happy for Melvin cuz he was so lonely plus our boys are so cute together I'm not really complaining! :D
You're right, sometimes sad is better, but this one said 'happy' to me. :)
And btw, extra points for the poems at the beginning of every chapter; they are awesome, especially the last one was perfect.
*beams*
Thank you, m'dear! :)
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