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Fic: Now And Forever I: Johnny’s Indulgence (9/22)

Aug 31, 2009 18:14

Title: Now And Forever I: Johnny’s Indulgence (9/22)
Author: BradyGirl_12
Pairings/Characters (this chapter): Mel/Johnny
Fandom: Public EnemiesGenres: AU, Captivefic, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance ( Read more... )

now and forever, public enemies, melvin purvis/johnny dillinger

Comments 11

samanthaevans August 31 2009, 23:38:27 UTC

*drool*

now that's hottt...

bradygirl_12 September 1 2009, 00:30:59 UTC

*drool*

now that's hottt...

Thank you, Samantha! :)

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bradygirl_12 September 1 2009, 20:51:43 UTC

Oh my.. I have to repeat myself once again! HOT. I wish I could say something improving but there's nothing to improve! :D But maybe I will find something........ someday! Now I'm just waitin for the update (like always, of course!)

*grins*

Glad you enjoyed the hotness! :)

No, wait! yes, there's so much fluff (well, not exactly fluff but u know.. too much emotion between the boys? Im not saying it's bad but I just didnt think John would be so... caring? I just cant get rid of that image. But Melvin, on the other hand, is more emotional in my mind) there.. Dunno if it's a bad or a good thing tho!

You're right, Mel would be the more emotional, but Johnny's a softie. ;) He seems to care about the people close to him, and Mel is becoming one of those.

What a novel I'm writing! Lol now I have to stop!

Novels are fine. :)

siriusfanatic September 1 2009, 21:39:02 UTC

Wow...that was extremely steamy...wow.
Hahah I hope Red or Homer weren't keeping watch outside the door and heard things they shouldn't!!

bradygirl_12 September 1 2009, 21:48:13 UTC

Wow...that was extremely steamy...wow.

*grins*

Glad you liked it! :)

Hahah I hope Red or Homer weren't keeping watch outside the door and heard things they shouldn't!!

*laughs*

Now that would be an interesting side story. ;)

brushed_velvet September 1 2009, 21:45:07 UTC

Whoo, short but hot!

I particularly liked Johnny's unspoken thought about not wanting to hurt Mel. Sweet.

bradygirl_12 September 1 2009, 21:52:28 UTC

Whoo, short but hot!

:)

I particularly liked Johnny's unspoken thought about not wanting to hurt Mel. Sweet.

And Johnny thinks he's completely in control! ;)

byeblackbird September 8 2009, 01:32:54 UTC

YOU. ARE. AN. AMAZING. WRITER.

And I love this ship. ♥

bradygirl_12 September 8 2009, 02:33:26 UTC

YOU. ARE. AN. AMAZING. WRITER.

*beams*

Thank you, m'dear! :)

And I love this ship. ♥

*laughs*

They're easy to love, aren't they? :)