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ava_jamison August 15 2009, 00:37:09 UTC
OMG! OMG! OMG!!!!

GREAT buildup! (to both the sacrifice scene and of Bruce's building stress.) LOVE the imagery, LOVE the dialogue.

WOW!

SO fun to see Bruce go all GRRRR.

Cannot wait for the next installment!

PS: Love Hal's “Just watch us, pal.” And then you followed it with Bruce losing it and going totally...
MMmmmm. Yes!:)

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bradygirl_12 August 15 2009, 00:52:05 UTC
OMG! OMG! OMG!!!!

GREAT buildup! (to both the sacrifice scene and of Bruce's building stress.) LOVE the imagery, LOVE the dialogue.

*grins*

Good dialogue is always a treasure. :)

WOW!

SO fun to see Bruce go all GRRRR.

I absolutely LOVE Protective Bruce! :)

Cannot wait for the next installment!

Hopefull won't be long! :)

PS: Love Hal's "Just watch us, pal." And then you followed it with Bruce losing it and going totally...
MMmmmm. Yes!:)

*grins*

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bradygirl_12 August 15 2009, 00:55:54 UTC
EEP! Love the build-up, and the cliffhanger!

Thank you kindly, Silver! :)

LOVE seeing Bruce go all "mine!" and "grrrr" and alpha! Go get your boy, Bruce!

It's my favorite way of seeing Bruce. :)

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thy_bane August 15 2009, 01:47:02 UTC
O.O *hyperventilates* MYGODMYGODMYGODMYGOD...!

BB! Why would you do that?! Give us nekkid, about-to-die Dick and then give us a cliffie? *spaz* That's so mean of you. But we still all love you, you big bully, because that chappie was amazing.

He needed to save the man he loved.

You GO, boy! *snap snap snap*

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bradygirl_12 August 15 2009, 02:10:27 UTC
O.O *hyperventilates* MYGODMYGODMYGODMYGOD...!

BB! Why would you do that?! Give us nekkid, about-to-die Dick and then give us a cliffie? *spaz*

'Cuz I'm evil. ;)

That's so mean of you. But we still all love you, you big bully, because that chappie was amazing.

Thank you kindly! :)

He needed to save the man he loved.

You GO, boy! *snap snap snap*

Absolutely! :)

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robin_lea August 15 2009, 05:12:23 UTC
I'm thinking I should have waited a little longer to catch up, then I wouldn't be hanging off this cliff! Loved the first three parts and waiting breathlessly for the fourth!

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bradygirl_12 August 15 2009, 16:27:25 UTC
I'm thinking I should have waited a little longer to catch up, then I wouldn't be hanging off this cliff! Loved the first three parts and waiting breathlessly for the fourth!

*laughs*

Cliffies keep the interest up! ;)

Glad you enjoyed this, Robin. :)

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vocallight August 15 2009, 06:43:46 UTC
Oh no! Oh no! Dickie!!! Hurry Bruce, your boy needs saving!

Magnificent tension!

I just find a free moment to get on again and see this series and I think to myself, "Brady always writes things that make me smile" so I dive right in and WOW! Not what I expected but so very very good!

I'm never going to get to sleep now!

This is so great to come back to! Bravo girl! You have managed to astound me again.

-Singer *biting her fingernails*

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bradygirl_12 August 15 2009, 16:29:28 UTC
Oh no! Oh no! Dickie!!! Hurry Bruce, your boy needs saving!

Magnificent tension!

Thank you, m'dear! :)

I just find a free moment to get on again and see this series and I think to myself, "Brady always writes things that make me smile" so I dive right in and WOW! Not what I expected but so very very good!

I think the ending will make you smile. :)

I'm never going to get to sleep now!

Eep! :)

This is so great to come back to! Bravo girl! You have managed to astound me again.

-Singer *biting her fingernails*

*laughs*

Thank you, sweetie! :)

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