Fic: Now And Forever I: Johnny’s Indulgence (1/22)

[bradygirl_12]

Title: Now And Forever I: Johnny’s Indulgence (1/22)
Author: BradyGirl_12
Pairings/Characters (this chapter): Mel/Johnny, Carter Baum
Fandom: Public EnemiesGenres: AU, Captivefic, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance

Comments

[manic_intent]

Great start :) Hope to see more.

[bradygirl_12]

Great start :) Hope to see more.

Thank you kindly! :)

[waitingtobelit]

Nice start! I can't wait to see where you take this. :)

[bradygirl_12]

Nice start! I can't wait to see where you take this. :)

Thank you! I had great fun writing this. :)

[magunetto]

DON'T STOP THERE, DARNIT KEEP GOING AHHH

you're gonna keep me in suspense, my dear. You're going to keep me in sadistic suspense..

*grins, flashing a peace sign*

[bradygirl_12]

DON'T STOP THERE, DARNIT KEEP GOING AHHH

you're gonna keep me in suspense, my dear. You're going to keep me in sadistic suspense..

*grins, flashing a peace sign*

LOL!

Yep, I'm afraid there will be suspense for awhile. It's a looong fic. ;)

But now that I've started posting, I should get into a rhythm of posting 2-3 times a week if I'm lucky.

*looks at 'To Write' List and sighs*

[calcus]

I like Carter's death occurring so close to the capturing, it should make things interesting in the next few chapters!

Looking forward to the rest! :)

[bradygirl_12]

I like Carter's death occurring so close to the capturing, it should make things interesting in the next few chapters!

Looking forward to the rest! :)

Thank you! I hope you won't be disappointed with the twist I gave this in the next chapter. :)