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Fic: Rainbow's Freedom (Sanctuary Arc) (16/17)

Apr 30, 2007 23:01

Title: Rainbow's Freedom (Sanctuary Arc) (16/17)
Author: BradyGirl
Characters/Pairings: Clark/Bruce, Ollie Queen, Hal Jordan, Steve Trevor, Elias Stark, Harvey Dent, Dax Mantell, Lex Luthor
Series Notes: In the 23rd century, Earth is a technologically-advanced society that practices slavery. The wealthy freeman Bruce Wayne acquires a highly-prized ( Read more... )

lex luthor, clark kent/bruce wayne, superman/batman, steve trevor, hal jordan, sanctuary arc, dax mantell, rainbow's freedom, ollie queen

Comments 38

greeneyelove May 1 2007, 04:08:39 UTC

Another great chapter. I like how their conversation seems to be a layout for what will come. I also like the connection Bruce and Clark share. I can't wait to see how Bruce will react when he finds out that Clark is what is mose feared.

And I adore the references to Harvey seeming unbalanced at times!

bradygirl_12 May 1 2007, 04:16:12 UTC

Thanks, Green Eyes! Yes, the meeting had a few foreshadowings here and there. :)

Yes, Bruce will be in for quite a shock!

I can't resist with Harvey. ;)

SQUEEE!!! mssupafan May 1 2007, 04:26:23 UTC

YAY! New chappie! *Squeees* WOW..I'm so glad Ollie got Melody away from Edmond for Bruce! *smiles appreciatively* I like Bruce more and more. Interesting topics in the meeting. Clark has unknowingly been given information about his heritage. I'm anxious to see what will happen when Bruce discovers Clark is Kryptonian! *eyes widen* GREAT work! It keeps getting better and better! :) I can't wait for more of the story!

Re: SQUEEE!!! bradygirl_12 May 1 2007, 04:38:53 UTC

Thanks, m'dear! :)

Bruce was just too bothered by Melody's situation to let it go.

Yes, there'll be more hints of Clark's Kryptonian heritage in future chapters before the ultimate Big Reveal (which is a ways off yet!). :)

theclexfactor May 1 2007, 06:21:31 UTC

There's only one more part left?!?! *Whines*...B-but, Bruce hasn't acknowledged his feelings, and Clark hasn't figured out he's Kryptonian, and I'm not convinced he has that disease, and there's SO MUCH!!!! I have faith in you :D

bradygirl_12 May 1 2007, 16:48:36 UTC

Yes, one more! :) And as for all the things you listed, that's what future arcs are for! ;)

I am honored by your faith in me, Clex! :)

theclexfactor May 1 2007, 22:45:58 UTC

Oh. Well then, have at it!

bradygirl_12 May 1 2007, 22:57:04 UTC

Thank you, m'dear! :) *goes off to scribble*

tmelange May 1 2007, 11:51:50 UTC

I really liked this part with all of the additional characters. There's someting very interesting about seeing Clark and Bruce's relationship against the backdrop of other people in that society. Bravo. Only one more chapter in this arc? Hmm...

bradygirl_12 May 1 2007, 16:55:54 UTC

Thank you, Theresa! I enjoy adding the additional characters to get the third person POV, and also to set up some subplots. ;)

enderwiggin24 May 1 2007, 14:42:51 UTC

wheee, so great that Melody got away from those idiots!!!!!
(though it wouldn't have surprise me, if they had her killed or already sold of somewhere already)
that news will make clark indeed very happy!!!!
and I am still so very a Lex girl, that I cannot stop wondering on which side Lex will be if Bruce is going to choose his slave over his own people and their beliefs :D

bradygirl_12 May 1 2007, 17:13:40 UTC

Thanks, Ender!

I just couldn't leave the little pumpkin there. And Bruce made sure to move on it as fast as he could, because you're right about the possibilities!

Clark will love the news. :)

Lex is wonderfully ambiguous. He's kind of in the background right now but will have a bigger role in the future. :)