Fic: By-The-Sea V: A Day At The Beach (2/3)
Title: By-The-Sea V: A Day At The Beach (2/3)
Author: BradyGirl_12
Pairings/Characters (this chapter): Steve/Diana, Clark/Bruce
Genres: Challenge, Fluff, Romance, Slice-Of-Life
Rating (this chapter): PG-13
Claim: For the dcu_freeforall Challenge (Clark/Bruce)Prompt: T 16; P 50: Ocean/Sea ( Read more... )
Author: BradyGirl_12
Pairings/Characters (this chapter): Steve/Diana, Clark/Bruce
Genres: Challenge, Fluff, Romance, Slice-Of-Life
Rating (this chapter): PG-13
Claim: For the dcu_freeforall Challenge (Clark/Bruce)Prompt: T 16; P 50: Ocean/Sea ( Read more... )
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I love the idea of them all on a beach togehter! And the towels, hee! :p
I hope there is more soon! :)
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I love the idea of them all on a beach togehter! And the towels, hee! :p
I couldn't resist! ;)
I hope there is more soon! :)
I'm working on Chapter Three right now! :)
Glad you enjoyed this, Star! :)
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“Ha! Just beginning, Boy Scout.”
Bruce calling Clark Boy Scout - I loved that. And I have to say, I really liked the „punishment scene" there.:D Boys had fun. That was great. :)
He was still a little awed at sitting here on the beach with the Trinity, for cryin’ out loud! He was on the beach with the most powerful man and woman on the planet, and the most exceptional non-meta.
Lucky boy. :)
I’m glad Steve and Diana are mostly so happy together in your stories. (I’m just a hopeless romantic for happy couples). :D
The "lotion applying scenes" were hot. :)
“ A little girl was falling off the speedboat. I put her back on board without anyone the wiser.”
“She saw you?”
“No, but she said, ‘Thank you, Superman!’”
AWWWWWW, I was thinking if there could be a scene with Superman saving somebody. That was amazing!
Nice dialogue. And Bruce was right - „smart girl“. :)
When he awoke, he felt the coolness of shade. Rolling over, he cracked open an eye and saw the umbrella over him and Steve, Diana and Clark standing at ( ... )
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"Ha! Just beginning, Boy Scout."
Bruce calling Clark Boy Scout - I loved that. And I have to say, I really liked the „punishment scene" there.:D Boys had fun. That was great. :)
*grins*
I enjoy the teasing between the boys. 'Boy Scout' is definitely the name for Clark! ;)
The 'punishment' was fun, too! :)
He was still a little awed at sitting here on the beach with the Trinity, for cryin’ out loud! He was on the beach with the most powerful man and woman on the planet, and the most exceptional non-meta.
Lucky boy. :)
Oh, yes! :)
I’m glad Steve and Diana are mostly so happy together in your stories. (I’m just a hopeless romantic for happy couples). :D
They just seem made for happiness! :)
The "lotion applying scenes" were hot. :)
*grins*
"A little girl was falling off the speedboat. I put her back on board without anyone the wiser ( ... )
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Steve's line about chemistry and then guh! With Bruce watching Clark eat ice cream...
I think it's my favorite part:
“Maybe it’s a primal thing,” Clark said as he licked the wooden spoon that came with his cup.
Bruce watched him, hastily averting his eyes as he dug into his ice cream.
Mmmm. Nice touch, very deft there, Bradygirl_12!
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Thank you, Ava! :)
Steve's line about chemistry and then guh! With Bruce watching Clark eat ice cream...
I think it's my favorite part:
"Maybe it’s a primal thing," Clark said as he licked the wooden spoon that came with his cup.
Bruce watched him, hastily averting his eyes as he dug into his ice cream.
Mmmm. Nice touch, very deft there, Bradygirl_12!
*grins*
It's fun to slip in things and see if anyone notices. ;)
Glad you enjoyed this, Ava! :)
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Comment spam to come as I get caught up! *hugs* :D
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He's a man of impeccable taste. ;)
Comment spam to come as I get caught up! *hugs* :D
I love comment spams! :)
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He enjoyed looking, reflecting wryly on the irony of his orientation leaning more toward his own gender before he met Diana, and he knew it had been the same for her.
Usually, in fics, you see generally straight people who fall for someone of their own gender. I like how you did it other way with Steve & Diana in this fic. Makes things interesting.
The banter is a lot of fun, and Bruce looking away when Clark was licking the spoon made me giggle. Looks like Gotham's Prince doesn't want to get ... distracted. And who can blame him? ;)
After lunch Steve stretched out on his blanket, smirking at the Wonder Woman design. Clark had a Batman blanket and Bruce a Superman one. Diana had chosen Black Canary.
That's too adorable! I wouldn't mind a Superman or a Batman blanket.
LOL at the little girl who knew Superman saved her. So sweet. The ending made me giggle too. Wonderful job!
Off to read the final chapter.
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I'm glad! :)
He enjoyed looking, reflecting wryly on the irony of his orientation leaning more toward his own gender before he met Diana, and he knew it had been the same for her.
Usually, in fics, you see generally straight people who fall for someone of their own gender. I like how you did it other way with Steve & Diana in this fic. Makes things interesting.
Well, I figured any sexual experiences/romances Diana had before coming to Man's World were with women, and Steve and Hal just seem to go together in my head, so their orientations would lean more toward their own genders, which is supremely ironic, of course. ;)
The banter is a lot of fun, and Bruce looking away when Clark was licking the spoon made me giggle. Looks like Gotham's Prince doesn't want to get ... distracted. And who can blame him? ;)
I can't! :)
After lunch Steve stretched out on his blanket, smirking at the Wonder Woman design. Clark had a Batman blanket and Bruce a ( ... )
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