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destinyawakened June 12 2009, 01:36:09 UTC
Aw, agonizing hurt and angst all in one. It's always so hard to read fic where Jim has to watch Bruce get hurt, it just seems so real. Great work, definitely looking to see how this plays out.

(I might steal your counter idea at the bottom, I've been meaning to do that for months no and never did it. I'm curious how many people actually read).

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bradygirl_12 June 12 2009, 01:45:13 UTC
Aw, agonizing hurt and angst all in one. It's always so hard to read fic where Jim has to watch Bruce get hurt, it just seems so real. Great work, definitely looking to see how this plays out.

Thank you! :)

Angst is just so satisfying! ;)

(I might steal your counter idea at the bottom, I've been meaning to do that for months no and never did it. I'm curious how many people actually read).

I like it. It helps me get some idea of how many readers I have. :)

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girl_on_moon June 12 2009, 02:24:02 UTC
Very nice start, and great tension and angst! More, please. :D

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bradygirl_12 June 12 2009, 02:27:26 UTC
Very nice start, and great tension and angst! More, please. :D

Thank you! Definitely more to come! :)

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urbankayakingya June 12 2009, 02:47:28 UTC
Awesome

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bradygirl_12 June 12 2009, 02:58:06 UTC
Awesome

Thank you kindly! :)

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bradygirl_12 June 12 2009, 17:03:31 UTC
Hooray for more Bruce/Jim from you! I love the scenario you've set up here. I can't wait to see how it all plays out! And to see it's part of your tabloids challenge, I'm officially intrigued. :)

*grins*

Yes, the Bruce/Jim plot bunny bit! ;)

The tabloids are sort of an undercurrent in this part of the trilogy, but will get stronger in the next. :)

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mithen June 12 2009, 04:29:24 UTC
Oh, very tense beginning! Jim's desperation is so palpable...

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bradygirl_12 June 12 2009, 17:04:57 UTC
Oh, very tense beginning! Jim's desperation is so palpable...

Thank you, Mithen! :)

I can't imagine what it's like to see a loved one bleeding on the sidewalk. :(

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