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Fic: Crystal-Blue Persuasion (1/1)

Apr 28, 2009 20:17

Title: Crystal-Blue Persuasion (1/1)
Author: BradyGirl_12
Pairings/Characters: Steve/Diana, Clark/Bruce
Genres: Challenge, Fluff, Romance, Slice-Of-Life
Rating: R
Claim: For the dcu_freeforall Challenge (Diana/Steve)Prompt: T 10; P 10: Crystal ( Read more... )

superman/batman, steve trevor/wonder woman, dcu_freeforall, clark kent/bruce wayne, steve trevor/diana prince, crystal blue persuasion, challenge

Comments 25

svgurl April 29 2009, 01:28:30 UTC

Aww, this was adorable! I really love your fics where Clark, Bruce, Steve and Diana are all spending time together. It really made me smile. :)

The dialogue was perfect as always and I love the way you write the characters.

“A combination of Ma’s cooking, Alfred’s, and mine,” Clark said.

“I notice that Bruce is absent on that list,” said Diana.

LOL It's okay, Bruce. If I had Alfred, I wouldn't know how to cook either. ;)

Wonderful job! :D

bradygirl_12 April 29 2009, 01:35:35 UTC

Aww, this was adorable! I really love your fics where Clark, Bruce, Steve and Diana are all spending time together. It really made me smile. :)

Thanks, sweetie! :)

I have some ideas for putting them in a cottage by the sea for my Summer Challenge this year. They just seem to go together nicely. :)

The dialogue was perfect as always and I love the way you write the characters.

"A combination of Ma’s cooking, Alfred’s, and mine," Clark said.

"I notice that Bruce is absent on that list," said Diana.

LOL It's okay, Bruce. If I had Alfred, I wouldn't know how to cook either. ;)

*giggles*

True! :)

Wonderful job! :D

I'm glad that you enjoyed this, SVGurl! :)

ctbn60 April 29 2009, 02:20:51 UTC

This was lovely. A virtual painting with words. You brought the glittering fortress to life. It was very visual. I could see it in my minds eye! Lovely! I liked the touches of the statues of people who were important in Clarks life. It was especially nice that he did it himself. And he cooks. Can I have a Superman/clark too!!

bradygirl_12 April 29 2009, 03:08:20 UTC

This was lovely. A virtual painting with words. You brought the glittering fortress to life. It was very visual. I could see it in my minds eye! Lovely!

Thank you, m'dear! It always does a writer's heart good to know that she painted a picture for her reader. :)

I liked the touches of the statues of people who were important in Clarks life. It was especially nice that he did it himself.

That's very Silver Age, of course! ;)

And he cooks. Can I have a Superman/clark too!!

LOL! I'm afraid we'd have to wrestle him away from Bruce. ;)

ctbn60 April 29 2009, 12:15:38 UTC

see I couldn't do that to bruce so I will take them both. This way they are happy and I'm VERY happy! lol

bradygirl_12 April 29 2009, 15:44:59 UTC

see I couldn't do that to bruce so I will take them both. This way they are happy and I'm VERY happy! lol

Everyone's happy! :)

vocallight April 29 2009, 04:50:49 UTC

This sounds so beautiful! I love how you use color themes!

Making fun of Bruce's cooking skills will never, never, get old!

Lovely!

-Singer

bradygirl_12 April 29 2009, 15:46:47 UTC

This sounds so beautiful! I love how you use color themes!

Color brings things to life! :)

Making fun of Bruce's cooking skills will never, never, get old!

*laughs*

It never does. ;)

Lovely!

-Singer

Thank you, Singer! :)

hitokaji April 29 2009, 05:07:30 UTC

Another happy fic! *happily sighs* :)

I don't know why but I always feel hungry when I read your fic.
And the idea of Bruce helped Clark do the cooking is so adorable! ^_^

bradygirl_12 April 29 2009, 15:48:44 UTC

Another happy fic! *happily sighs* :)

*grins*

I enjoy writing happy fic! :)

I don't know why but I always feel hungry when I read your fic.
And the idea of Bruce helped Clark do the cooking is so adorable! ^_^

LOL! I'm glad the descriptions of food are so vivid, and as for Bruce, we have to keep our eye on him in the kitchen. ;)

confusedkayt April 29 2009, 05:47:17 UTC

Awww! Diana makes a wonderful POV character... She really sees everything, doesn't she?

I love how you managed to convey years worth of affection and togetherness in both relationships. It's a delight to read about our heroes coming together, of course, but it's a rare and pleasant treat to see how delightful relationships can be when they're broken in. This fic conveyed such happy, homey comfort.

bradygirl_12 April 29 2009, 15:56:46 UTC

Awww! Diana makes a wonderful POV character... She really sees everything, doesn't she?

She's a great observer of those around her! :)

I love how you managed to convey years worth of affection and togetherness in both relationships. It's a delight to read about our heroes coming together, of course, but it's a rare and pleasant treat to see how delightful relationships can be when they're broken in. This fic conveyed such happy, homey comfort.

I like established relationship fics. There tends to be more comfort rather than anxiety/angst as in first-time fics. :)