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ilovetobefree April 28 2009, 16:36:23 UTC
Wonderful update Bradygirl!

Poor Roy and Melody. They both have such terrible and painful memories. Especially Melody. I think, it was sad for Roy seeing Brave Boy to die, but Melody was witness of so many cruel things and torture living in Caldwells. And she knows these people are still there, torturing and killing the poor slaves.

Neither one noticed the door close softly.
Reading the paragraphs of Roy’s and Melody’s nightmares and especially the part with Roy calming and soothing Melody, I was expecting Dinah, Oliver (or both?) would come to the room. It seems someone did it, but seeing Roy was able to calm Melody and they understood so well each other, the visitor left unnoticed. *Hugs Melody and Roy*

I loved Oliver-Roy’s talk - in both the paragraphs. And I like Roy’s personality. (and the „moxie“ :))
He followed his Master down the steps, gaping at the computers and other equipment, and a yellow car…!

The Black Canary appeared, a bright smile on her face.

“Welcome to the Arrow Cave, Roy.”
Awesome! *Big smile* I was hoping Roy would meet Green Arrow and Black Canary anytime soon. But I was afraid it was not going to happen in this chapter. I’m so happy it was. :)

Lovely, Lovely ending. Thanks. :)
Looking forward to more.
LS.

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bradygirl_12 April 28 2009, 16:57:08 UTC
Wonderful update Bradygirl!

Thank you! :)

Poor Roy and Melody. They both have such terrible and painful memories. Especially Melody. I think, it was sad for Roy seeing Brave Boy to die, but Melody was witness of so many cruel things and torture living in Caldwells. And she knows these people are still there, torturing and killing the poor slaves.

Yes, the poor kids have it rough. :(

Neither one noticed the door close softly.
Reading the paragraphs of Roy’s and Melody’s nightmares and especially the part with Roy calming and soothing Melody, I was expecting Dinah, Oliver (or both?) would come to the room. It seems someone did it, but seeing Roy was able to calm Melody and they understood so well each other, the visitor left unnoticed. *Hugs Melody and Roy*

Yes, whoever was there felt that Roy was doing a good job, and Melody was helping him, too.

I loved Oliver-Roy’s talk - in both the paragraphs. And I like Roy’s personality. (and the "moxie" :))

The boy has plenty of that! :)

He followed his Master down the steps, gaping at the computers and other equipment, and a yellow car…!

The Black Canary appeared, a bright smile on her face.

"Welcome to the Arrow Cave, Roy."
Awesome! *Big smile* I was hoping Roy would meet Green Arrow and Black Canary anytime soon. But I was afraid it was not going to happen in this chapter. I’m so happy it was. :)

I speeded it up a little and it was fun to write. :)

Lovely, Lovely ending. Thanks. :)
Looking forward to more.
LS.

Always more to come! ;)

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