Fic: Top Gun (2/4)

[bradygirl_12]

Title: Top Gun (2/4)
Author: BradyGirl
Pairings/Characters (ths chapter): Steve/Diana, Greg Tolliver, Del Rayner, Jack Sullivan, Aaron Krazniak
Genres: Challenge, Drama
Rating (this chapter): PG-13
Claim: For the dcu_freeforall Challenge (Diana/Steve)Prompt: T 8; P 44: Pilot

Comments

[bradygirl_12]

*plbbbt* at the attitude, boys!

Great job, lady!

LOL! Glad you enjoyed this, Merfilly! :)

Silly boys! They're probably just jealous that Steve's got the interest of Wonder Woman. :)

[crimsonquills]

At this point I'm just waiting for these guys to get enlightened. Possibly forcibly, in some way. *g*

[bradygirl_12]

At this point I'm just waiting for these guys to get enlightened. Possibly forcibly, in some way. *g*

*grins*

These guys really don't get it, do they? :)

[stinglikeabee]

“She works my pole just fine.”

AHAHAHA. I feel like I have to apologise after laughing though :3

The other thing this great chapter points out, all this talk about women being gossipy creatures works with men too. They're talking trash about Steve behind his back and making idle speculation about his love life. Tut-tut. I can't wait till these guys get their attitudes readjusted.

[bradygirl_12]

“She works my pole just fine.”

AHAHAHA. I feel like I have to apologise after laughing though :3

LOL! No apologies necessary. ;)

The other thing this great chapter points out, all this talk about women being gossipy creatures works with men too. They're talking trash about Steve behind his back and making idle speculation about his love life. Tut-tut. I can't wait till these guys get their attitudes readjusted.

*grins*

Men are worse gossips! ;)

[starsandsea]

Can I hope Diana is going to hit some sense into the idiot men? :p

*hearts Steve* I'm looking forward to more! :)

[bradygirl_12]

Can I hope Diana is going to hit some sense into the idiot men? :p

I'm sure she's tempted! :)

*hearts Steve* I'm looking forward to more! :)

Thank you, m'dear! Glad you're enjoying this. :)

[bradygirl_12]

Wow, I really like this story so far! I think one of the things that made the worse Steve Trevor stories so bad is that they tried to tackle issues of women-men-social-heirarchy, but did so with the same clunkiness that a lot of comics hit when they handle social issues.

Oh, yes, there were some dreadful stories. *pets Steve*

But you're doing a great job with it! Because it feels much more organic in your hands, especially that last scene with the pilots. That just feels like something a lot of male humans would say about a woman dating an Amazon.

Oh, yeah. I haven't had lunch with a bunch of fighter pilots, but I've read enough about the 'Right Stuff' boys to take a stab at their attitudes. ;)

Awesome work! Can't wait to see where you take it from here.

*beams*

Thank you! :)