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Fic: Rainbow's Freedom (Sanctuary Arc) (5/17)

Mar 24, 2007 21:33

Title: Rainbow's Freedom (Sanctuary Arc) (5/17)
Author: BradyGirl
Characters/Pairings: Clark/Bruce, Alfred
Series Notes: In the 23rd century, Earth is a technologically-advanced society that practices slavery. The wealthy freeman Bruce Wayne acquires a highly-prized bedslave whom he learns to cherish...but can he every truly love a slave? And will ( Read more... )

superman/batman, sanctuary arc, alfred pennyworth, clark kent/bruce wayne, rainbow's freedom

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naughty__pixie March 25 2007, 18:53:17 UTC

oh great chapter! I am falling asleep in front of my pc but i just wanted to tell you i love the twist you gave it. i was wondering how you were going to justify this but it worked really well. (i really hope this is making some sort of sense) poor Clark. I can't wait to see how you'll allow him to forget his shot...

bradygirl_12 March 26 2007, 00:50:59 UTC

Hi, my pretty Pixie! I can understand sleepiness! :) But I'm glad you enjoyed this latest chapter.

naughty__pixie March 26 2007, 03:20:30 UTC

sorry about the lame post. I meant tow write more but i literally fell asleep while typing.
I loved the fact that Clark was *quite* afraid of Batman but would rather not meet him in a dark ally. LOL. I'm loving the attention to detail in this fic. tho i have to admit that for every chapter you have posted, at the end of the chapter i always think "it *can't* stop here~!! it's not *enough*! damnit i need moooooore!" ehm. yeah. this is one of those fics that i will likely be begging for sequels when it is finally finished. lol. we don't have *nearly* enough slavefics in this fandom...

bradygirl_12 March 26 2007, 03:35:19 UTC

Thank you for your comments! I'm trying to be as detailed as possible, throwing in things here and there that might make people go, "Hmm" or "Oh!" or "Ah *ha*!" ;)

I think you might be satisfied with the length of this. Three more arcs plotted for sure so far. ;)

naughty__pixie March 26 2007, 04:42:32 UTC

throwing in things here and there that might make people go, "Hmm" or "Oh!" or "Ah *ha*!" ;)

oh it's definitely making us go Ah and Oh. lol

I think you might be satisfied with the length of this. Three more arcs plotted for sure so far. ;)

oh yay!! can't wait ! really really can't!

bradygirl_12 March 26 2007, 14:26:59 UTC

Heh heh. Thanks!

naughty__pixie March 26 2007, 03:22:38 UTC

oh and i am really glad you wrote the history out as being raised in Asia, we didn't really focus all that much attention to American history. we know the basics but i wouldn't have known the names and dates and etc. so yeah, good call!

bradygirl_12 March 26 2007, 03:35:55 UTC

Glad you didn't mind the history lesson! ;)

naughty__pixie March 26 2007, 04:40:14 UTC

Appreciated it.

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