Fic: The Body Sings (5/5)

[bradygirl_12]

Title: The Body Sings (5/5)
Author: BradyGirl
Pairings/Characters (this chapter): Morgaine Le Fey, Enigma, Clark/Bruce, Steve/Diana
Genres: Drama, Romance
Rating (this chapter): PG-13
Warnings: None
Spoilers: For Trinity #5 and #6
General Summary: Power and its attractions for mere mortals.
Chapter Summary: Morgaine Le Fey and Enigma ponder

Comments

[greeneyelove]

Lovely ending!

You are the best Steve/Diana writer around!

[bradygirl_12]

Lovely ending!

You are the best Steve/Diana writer around!

Thank you, dear! *beams* :)

[svgurl]

That was wonderful! What a perfect ending.

Ignore Batman and Trevor at your peril, Sorceress.

That line made me smile. :D

Great work!

[bradygirl_12]

That was wonderful! What a perfect ending.

Ignore Batman and Trevor at your peril, Sorceress.

That line made me smile. :D

Great work!

Thank you, SVGurl! :)

The all-powerful tend to overlook us poor mortals, sometimes to their everlasting regret. ;)

[anonymous]

...Superman and Batman’s joined hands.
“I was unaware the Dark Knight was so sentimental.”
Enigma laughed. “He’s got his soft side.”

I love the Dark Knight soft side. :)
The last chapter of this story was wonderful!
The thoughts about the Keystones were very well written.

Ignore Batman and Trevor at your peril, Sorceress.

In the magical smoke, Superman and Batman exchanged silent communication while Wonder Woman threw a wink over her shoulder at Steve, who smiled back.
I loved the ending. :)
LS

[bradygirl_12]

...Superman and Batman’s joined hands.
"I was unaware the Dark Knight was so sentimental."
Enigma laughed. "He’s got his soft side."

I love the Dark Knight soft side. :)

It's kind of cool to think of the Bat with a soft side, isn't it? ;)

The last chapter of this story was wonderful!
The thoughts about the Keystones were very well written.

Thank you kindly! :)

Ignore Batman and Trevor at your peril, Sorceress.

In the magical smoke, Superman and Batman exchanged silent communication while Wonder Woman threw a wink over her shoulder at Steve, who smiled back.
I loved the ending. :)
LS

Thank you, LS! :)

I enjoyed 'fixing' this a little. :)

[anonymous]

I love the Dark Knight soft side. :)

It's kind of cool to think of the Bat with a soft side, isn't it? ;)
I agree :)
LS

[laramoon]

aww! sweet ending. :) I'm guessing that the way you left this, there will be more - right? /is hopeful.

[bradygirl_12]

aww! sweet ending. :) I'm guessing that the way you left this, there will be more - right? /is hopeful.

Could be! ;)

I think I'll see how Trinity goes and see if I can do more tweaking with the canon. ;)

[saavikam77]

Wow! Perfect ending to this. Enigma's right, Morgaine is a fool to discount Bruce and Steve, and the power of the two relationships. Love the way you showed the Trinity as having that unbalance created by Clark and Bruce being together, but being re-balanced by Diana having Steve. It's a very strong shape, when you think about it. Something almost... molecular about it...

*applauds* :)

[bradygirl_12]

Wow! Perfect ending to this. Enigma's right, Morgaine is a fool to discount Bruce and Steve, and the power of the two relationships.

Never underestimate 'mere' humans! ;)

Love the way you showed the Trinity as having that unbalance created by Clark and Bruce being together, but being re-balanced by Diana having Steve. It's a very strong shape, when you think about it. Something almost... molecular about it...

Everything just seemed 'off' in the book, so I had to fix it! :)

*applauds* :)

Thank you, Saavi! Glad you enjoyed it! :)