Comments | bradygirl_12: Fic: Rainbow's Freedom (RobinSong Arc) (4/41)

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Fic: Rainbow's Freedom (RobinSong Arc) (4/41)

Apr 01, 2008 20:19

Title: Rainbow’s Freedom (RobinSong Arc) (4/41)
Author: BradyGirl
Pairings/Characters: (this chapter): Clark/Bruce, Alfred
Series Notes: In the 23rd century, Earth is a technologically-advanced society that practices the ancient institution of slavery. As Bruce and Clark try and adjust to being lovers as well as Master and slave, on a warm spring ( Read more... )

superman/batman, robinsong arc, clark kent/bruce wayne, rainbow's freedom

Comments 16

jeannev April 2 2008, 00:51:46 UTC

bradygirl_12 April 2 2008, 00:54:05 UTC

This chapter seems like a lovely interlude. The mood is set, we get a real glimpse into what life is like for Bruce and Clark now. But there also seems that subtle hint that life is soon to change.

I think the robin gives you the hint. ;)

But you're right: life is pretty good for our boys right now, but it's going to get even better! :)

I love pulling up my flist and seeing a new chapter of this. It never fails to make me smile.

*beams* Thank you, Jeannev! :)

ranger_girl0301 April 2 2008, 00:56:33 UTC

Eee! The Circus! And mushy love!

bradygirl_12 April 2 2008, 01:16:06 UTC

Eee! The Circus! And mushy love!

*grins* A good combo!

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bradygirl_12 April 2 2008, 01:17:10 UTC

Circus! Harbinger! Robin approaches!

*bites nails and awaits the appearance of a certain Little Bird*

Soon, my dear! Very soon! :)

greeneyelove April 2 2008, 02:05:20 UTC

They are so in love! It's such a beautiful image and the setting you paint shows that.

I'm eager for the next part and the circus.

bradygirl_12 April 2 2008, 02:16:47 UTC

They are so in love! It's such a beautiful image and the setting you paint shows that.

Thank you, sweetness! I love to write the boys as happy when I can. :)

I'm eager for the next part and the circus.

Hopefully it'll have an impact! :)

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bradygirl_12 April 2 2008, 17:09:30 UTC

The love they share is beautiful, but it's terrible to know that it has to be hidden in public.

*nods* Like gay love has always been hidden before the latter part of the 20th century, and still has to be hidden in some cases.

The symbolism of the Robin was wonderfully done, as was this chapter, full of happiness when tradegy only lurks right round the corner...

Thank you! I get all sappy with Robin. ;) But we've had plenty of birds, usually robins, building their nests around our houses and we get to watch the mama and papa birds feed their babies and listen to their cheeping. :)